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Pete's Enigma

Pete's spouse accused him of having no class. Socially, folks avoided him en masse. He had a most dreadful flaw, That made some people guffaw. He could not control the passing of gas! Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired

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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 12/5/2015 1:54:00 PM
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A superbly constructed LIMERICK in 10/10/7/7/10 format, perfectly acceptable. and what a hoot! (pardon the pun!) I find that keeping the required meter is hard for me, so I don't try many of 'em. I'd rather be entertained by other peoples' efforts! BRAVO my friend!! Best wishes, Keith 7
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/1/2015 6:21:00 PM
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good one, Robert. a soupmail for ya!!
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Maurice Rigoler
Date: 10/13/2015 12:54:00 PM
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Hey, Robert, I think we all have Pete's flaw, some worse than others! Got a laugh from this one. Keep'em coming. / M
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Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 10/14/2015 11:48:00 AM
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Glad you enjoyed, Maurice! Have been enjoying your writes and happy that you have worked Flackmouth back in to your works. Take good care - bob h
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 10/10/2015 8:28:00 PM
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great to see a poem of yours, bob - it's been a while for me. this one is a gem...
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Mark Woods
Date: 10/10/2015 6:35:00 PM
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Brilliant. A guilt that many can relate with.. Thanks for the laugh today
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Jan Allison
Date: 10/10/2015 6:22:00 PM
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ha ha ha:-) hugs Jan xx
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 10/10/2015 6:14:00 PM
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Hello Bob... I think Pete's best option is to become a ventriloquist - thanks for the grin Bob - Lindsay
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Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 10/11/2015 7:43:00 PM
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Thank you, mate! Always great to hear from you and glad you enjoyed the write - Bob H

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