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Peter the Cheater

There once was a gambler named Peter At poker he was known as a cheater Hid cards behind his ear Even put some up his rear Till Dangerous Dan shot him with his heater © Jack Ellison 2015

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 9/15/2015 9:41:00 AM

Uh oh! Always, Laura

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/15/2015 9:45:00 AM

Now that's downright silly! LOL But what else did you expect! Love, Jack xxx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/10/2015 10:04:00 PM

I love the next to last line. A magician on America's Got Talent did that!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/15/2015 9:44:00 AM

Wonder he will enter... a winner for sure! LOL xxx

Tim Smith

Date: 9/10/2015 11:01:00 AM

Straight through the eye with his Colt 45....never to cheat again in this little ol' dive...them the rules...damn the fools....Dangerous Dan and the rest of the honest folk will survive

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/10/2015 11:35:00 AM

"Straight through the eye"!!!! YIKES!

Carol Eastman

Date: 9/10/2015 10:35:00 AM

I used this as a lesson for Dragon... not to ever cheat! Grandpa Troll wants to know if Peter the Cheater lived in the Wild West? If so, he said that Limmerwulf may be interested in visiting his town to give us the whole scoop on the towns history... This winter. You know LimmerWulf... Always on the move, and probably always looking for a new place to visit! LOL... Yep! That's him!