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Peter Pan

Famous garb of tighty-tights In flying high a child delights To never have a crappy day He smiles and floats and flies away Propensity to lie ingrained From that moment mind constrained If only we could fly again The smile would surely follow Old and tested never tried Life a disappointing ride Until the day that I decide To be like Peter Pan

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Date: 11/21/2019 1:43:00 PM
Hello Fred Jagenberg, hi! So nice to meet you. I remember watching Peter pan on tv. as a child. As i watched I felt i was in another place. have a nice day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/22/2019 2:27:00 PM
Your welcome Fred,I will be reading more of your poetry. Have a niceday my friend.
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Fred Jagenberg
Date: 11/21/2019 3:07:00 PM
Many thanks Darlene for reading my poetry. I appreciate all your comments. A great day for you as well.
Date: 11/12/2019 8:25:00 AM
A belated welcome to the soup. You fly high with this one.
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Fred Jagenberg
Date: 11/21/2019 3:08:00 PM
Hello Richard. Thank you so much for reading my poetry. I appreciate your comments and favor.
Date: 9/22/2019 6:43:00 PM
G'day Fred … interesting verse indeed. Certainly flows nicely - well done Fred - Lindsay
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Date: 9/22/2019 6:30:00 PM
Interesting topic; interesting poem, Fred! Welcome to Poetry Soup. Hope to read more from you. Best wishes, Gershon
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