Fred Jagenberg Poet Rhyme

Peter Pan

Famous garb of tighty-tights 
In flying high a child delights 
To never have a crappy day 
He smiles and floats and flies away 
 
Propensity to lie ingrained 
From that moment mind constrained 
If only we could fly again 
The smile would surely follow 
 
Old and tested never tried 
Life a disappointing ride 
Until the day that I decide 
To be like Peter Pan

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Darlene De Beaulieu November 21, 2019 at 1:43 PM Hello Fred Jagenberg, hi! So nice to meet you. I remember watching Peter pan on tv. as a child. As i watched I felt i was in another place. have a nice day my friend. Darlene De Beaulieu November 22, 2019 at 2:27 PM Your welcome Fred,I will be reading more of your poetry. Have a niceday my friend. Fred Jagenberg November 21, 2019 at 3:07 PM Many thanks Darlene for reading my poetry. I appreciate all your comments. A great day for you as well.

Richard Lamoureux November 12, 2019 at 8:25 AM A belated welcome to the soup. You fly high with this one. Fred Jagenberg November 21, 2019 at 3:08 PM Hello Richard. Thank you so much for reading my poetry. I appreciate your comments and favor.

Lindsay Laurie September 22, 2019 at 6:43 PM G'day Fred … interesting verse indeed. Certainly flows nicely - well done Fred - Lindsay

Gershon Wolf September 22, 2019 at 6:30 PM Interesting topic; interesting poem, Fred! Welcome to Poetry Soup. Hope to read more from you. Best wishes, Gershon