Pete

There was a boy named Pete
His joy was to dance and sing
He was rather tongue tied 
Despite he has plenty pride
Dancing with two left feet
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October 5, 2024 at 11:58 AM
Even though he had two left feet, nothing could stop dear old pete, given half a chance, he'd get up and dance, but was never in time with the beat.
Jones Avatar
October 5, 2024 at 2:51 PM
lol! I love it!
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September 4, 2024 at 8:49 PM
Great limerick. Can one be born with two left feet? I suppose anything can happen in this upside down world :)
Jones Avatar
September 5, 2024 at 3:22 AM
Thanks! Well born with no feet or abnormalities hasn’t stopped the Paralympic athletes! ;0)
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September 3, 2024 at 6:38 PM
This a fine limerick. Maybe dance lessons will help.
Jones Avatar
September 5, 2024 at 3:24 AM
Maybe lessons will but he is still passionate and likely the life of the party! Thanks for liking it!
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September 2, 2024 at 12:20 PM
I enjoyed reading your fun/cute "Pete" Limerick write. Many have 2 left feet. Dance On.... Have a great day/week writing away..................
Rodrigues Avatar
September 2, 2024 at 5:55 AM
Cute. Seeing your title though…lost my nephew “Pete,” almost 3 years ago.
Jones Avatar
September 2, 2024 at 7:12 AM
Oh no Kim. Deepest sympathies for your family loss. Hugs
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