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Pete

There was a boy named Pete His joy was to dance and sing He was rather tongue tied Despite he has plenty pride Dancing with two left feet

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Date: 10/5/2024 11:58:00 AM
Even though he had two left feet, nothing could stop dear old pete, given half a chance, he'd get up and dance, but was never in time with the beat.
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Karen Jones
Date: 10/5/2024 2:51:00 PM
lol! I love it!
Date: 9/4/2024 8:49:00 PM
Great limerick. Can one be born with two left feet? I suppose anything can happen in this upside down world :)
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Karen Jones
Date: 9/5/2024 3:22:00 AM
Thanks! Well born with no feet or abnormalities hasn’t stopped the Paralympic athletes! ;0)
Date: 9/3/2024 6:38:00 PM
This a fine limerick. Maybe dance lessons will help.
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Karen Jones
Date: 9/5/2024 3:24:00 AM
Maybe lessons will but he is still passionate and likely the life of the party! Thanks for liking it!
Date: 9/2/2024 12:20:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your fun/cute "Pete" Limerick write. Many have 2 left feet. Dance On.... Have a great day/week writing away..................
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Date: 9/2/2024 5:55:00 AM
Cute. Seeing your title though…lost my nephew “Pete,” almost 3 years ago.
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Karen Jones
Date: 9/2/2024 7:12:00 AM
Oh no Kim. Deepest sympathies for your family loss. Hugs
Date: 9/2/2024 5:52:00 AM
Let's give Pete an A for effort anyway
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Karen Jones
Date: 9/2/2024 7:11:00 AM
lol Pete’s passion makes him a winner in my book!

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