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Petals To the Ground

I allowed a hand to
    pluck me from my garden...

Friends picked up my crushed petals
when they fell like tears to the ground
without saying, "I told you so."

friendship loveother

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Timothy Ray

Date: 7/23/2023 3:07:00 PM

ahhhh such a beautiful thought and so on course in its wisdom

Brian Sambourne

Date: 5/10/2023 7:35:00 PM

Superbly written. Friendship bends best in unconditional acceptance, free of "I told you so." Best wishes, Brian

Susan Lawrence

Date: 4/10/2023 1:50:00 PM

Just beautiful ...from your heart and soul. True friendship is a cherished gift indeed. Susan :)

Jenna Logan
Date: 4/11/2023 2:58:00 AM

Thanks very much, Susan.

Deb M

Date: 4/8/2023 7:33:00 AM

That is perfect Jenna…real true friends never say l told you so (even if they think it hehe!!) and are there for all of you good, bad and ugly!! Another beauty my lovely! Debx

Jenna Logan
Date: 4/11/2023 2:57:00 AM

Thank you, Deb, not only for being a friend... so much more.

Frederic Parker

Date: 4/8/2023 7:13:00 AM

the silent knowledge of understanding and compassion

Jenna Logan
Date: 4/11/2023 2:56:00 AM

I knew you'd feel the empathy, Frederic. Thank you.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 4/7/2023 6:31:00 PM

We all need such true friends, Jenna:)

Jenna Logan
Date: 4/11/2023 2:56:00 AM

Thank you, Joanna.

David Kavanagh

Date: 4/7/2023 10:35:00 AM

Ah you certainly plucked this one from your muses garden Jenna, intelligent empathetic writing, and I’m telling you so, cheers David

Jenna Logan
Date: 4/7/2023 11:19:00 AM

Hi David. I'd not be so disrespectful as to argue with your thoughts. ;). I'm thankful for the many comments you've given me for encouragement and support.

John Lawless

Date: 4/7/2023 9:55:00 AM

NOW THAT IS POETRY!!!!!!. I've read it five times to savor its pain and the relief of friendship....just being there. This may slip past the "algorithm" but is my POEM OF THE DAY....i give it a wicked pissa Boston F A V E....

Jenna Logan
Date: 4/7/2023 10:31:00 AM

Thank you very much, John. I'm not on Admin's "good girl" list but I think they allowed me a potd a few weeks ago. However, to get a personal potd AND a fave from you is worth more to me. I humbly say, "thank you." I love Boston! Mike's cannolis!!

Petals To the Ground

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