Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Verse

Petals Delivery

Delicately, I hold the soft smooth petals
                            Tracing each edge of the curve
                    Gently enough not to render any harm
                   Beckoning is the silky feel of inches swell
                                    Can't help to sweat
                                   Can't stop to tremble
                        I maximize the wonderful experience
                 Shattering defense with strong willed cause
                                   Panting and blowing
                   Breath stopping with each alternate pause
                          Petals bloom in bright bloody red
                   Rockets of joy from a travel hours of thorns
                           The one pistil blossomed with life
                           Made all expectators clap and yell
                             The stamen soothed the petals
                           Tenderly lovingly and caressingly


By
Olive Eloisa
5:10 pm
May 05, 2015
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Sponsor	Jerry T Curtis
Contest Name	N/A
2nd place

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James Fraser July 17, 2015 at 2:32 PM Ones stem shall arise amidst enlightening grow, sap shall surge in increasing flow. When such forwards in hungered show, it's a delight to grace when petals grow - //xx// hugs forever//James xxxx

James Fraser September 30, 2014 at 5:40 PM One feels exasperated at the beauty of a flowers petals. Reading this poem takes me on another journey, of which I'll recall one day and write my thoughts. Once again wonderfully written poetry, James :) x Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser October 1, 2014 at 1:38 AM thanks much James.. :) I appreciate your comments.. :D

Mohan Chutani June 12, 2014 at 5:34 AM Olive this is a beautiful read. It is natural to get different interpretations and feel on different occasions by the same person and still it refreshes. Loved it. Mohan Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 14, 2014 at 5:33 AM :) thank you.. :)

Casarah Nance June 10, 2014 at 3:55 PM Worthy of re-reading, Well done on the contest, still as i said before a beautiful poem :) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 11, 2014 at 2:49 PM Thanks you Casarah..:D

Barbara Gorelick June 10, 2014 at 3:54 PM Erotic..I love it..Congrats again..Your on a roll! BG Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 11, 2014 at 2:49 PM woooooh?! i did not intend to be as erotic.. :D thanks BArbara.. :)

Poet Destroyer A June 10, 2014 at 3:31 PM Congratulations... Olive, enjoying your wins...Linda

Paul Callus June 10, 2014 at 2:02 PM Congratulations Olive_eloi!!!! This is a worthy winner:)) // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 10, 2014 at 2:48 PM Thank you dearie Paul.. :D hugs and hugs.. :D

Deborah Shiells May 10, 2014 at 11:40 AM Hi Olive, This write is so beautiful really beautiful... From beginning to end. I now have a deeper appreciation For rose petals. Thank so much for sharing this write with us here. Great poem. Peace, Deborah Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 10, 2014 at 4:44 PM Thanks DEborah.. I appreciate you dropping by.. :) Thanks much.. :)

Jerry T Curtis May 9, 2014 at 7:36 PM This Olive, needs no contest to be a winner, it stands alone , in beauty and passion. Thank you for bringing it to my attention. JTC Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 10, 2014 at 3:20 AM :O?! thanks Jerry.. :) GBU.. :)

Aiyah Torres May 6, 2014 at 10:51 AM awww!!! .. deep write... and full of passion!! ... the petals and its thorn, that made a flower bloomed to its finest.. :O)) very well done, Oive!!! ^_^ Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 7, 2014 at 3:38 AM Thanks Aiyah.. :)

Casarah Nance May 6, 2014 at 6:33 AM Beautiful. Isn't it amazing how amazing somethings truly are ;) well said beautiful Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 10, 2014 at 3:26 AM Thank you Casarah.. :) your comments are well appreciated.. :)

Arthur Vaso May 5, 2014 at 9:14 PM BEAUTIFUL simply BEAUTIFUL :) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 10, 2014 at 3:21 AM thank you Arthur for the beautiful comment.. :)

Justin Bordner May 5, 2014 at 8:19 PM I read this as being an extraordinary expression of erotic need Olive. Great touch to the words. J.A.B. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 7, 2014 at 3:35 AM Thanks much JAB.. :) like every drop by you made.. :)

Paul Callus May 5, 2014 at 5:30 PM Olive_eloi...this was written so passionately; senses intertwined....touch, sight....verging on the sensual. [see what roses can do to you!] this reminds me of some other petals..... // paul Paul Callus May 6, 2014 at 5:22 PM Yes, I do...thank you...:)) :P Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 6, 2014 at 3:50 PM weeee Thank PAul.. :) Im glad you like it.. :) i think i'll take your advice.. :) think it's better then/.. :D