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Petals Delivery

Delicately, I hold the soft smooth petals
                            Tracing each edge of the curve
                    Gently enough not to render any harm
                   Beckoning is the silky feel of inches swell
                                    Can't help to sweat
                                   Can't stop to tremble
                        I maximize the wonderful experience
                 Shattering defense with strong willed cause
                                   Panting and blowing
                   Breath stopping with each alternate pause
                          Petals bloom in bright bloody red
                   Rockets of joy from a travel hours of thorns
                           The one pistil blossomed with life
                           Made all expectators clap and yell
                             The stamen soothed the petals
                           Tenderly lovingly and caressingly


By
Olive Eloisa
5:10 pm
May 05, 2015
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Sponsor	Jerry T Curtis
Contest Name	N/A
2nd place

Copyright © Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser | Year Posted 2014

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James Fraser Date: 7/17/2015 2:32:00 PM Ones stem shall arise amidst enlightening grow, sap shall surge in increasing flow. When such forwards in hungered show, it's a delight to grace when petals grow - //xx// hugs forever//James xxxx Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 9/30/2014 5:40:00 PM One feels exasperated at the beauty of a flowers petals. Reading this poem takes me on another journey, of which I'll recall one day and write my thoughts. Once again wonderfully written poetry, James :) x Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 10/1/2014 1:38:00 AM thanks much James.. :) I appreciate your comments.. :D

Mohan Chutani Date: 6/12/2014 5:34:00 AM Olive this is a beautiful read. It is natural to get different interpretations and feel on different occasions by the same person and still it refreshes. Loved it. Mohan Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/14/2014 5:33:00 AM :) thank you.. :)

Casarah Nance Date: 6/10/2014 3:55:00 PM Worthy of re-reading, Well done on the contest, still as i said before a beautiful poem :) Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/11/2014 2:49:00 PM Thanks you Casarah..:D

Barbara Gorelick Date: 6/10/2014 3:54:00 PM Erotic..I love it..Congrats again..Your on a roll! BG Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/11/2014 2:49:00 PM woooooh?! i did not intend to be as erotic.. :D thanks BArbara.. :)

Poet Destroyer A Date: 6/10/2014 3:31:00 PM Congratulations... Olive, enjoying your wins...Linda Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 6/10/2014 2:02:00 PM Congratulations Olive_eloi!!!! This is a worthy winner:)) // paul Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/10/2014 2:48:00 PM Thank you dearie Paul.. :D hugs and hugs.. :D

Deborah Shiells Date: 5/10/2014 11:40:00 AM Hi Olive, This write is so beautiful really beautiful... From beginning to end. I now have a deeper appreciation For rose petals. Thank so much for sharing this write with us here. Great poem. Peace, Deborah Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 5/10/2014 4:44:00 PM Thanks DEborah.. I appreciate you dropping by.. :) Thanks much.. :)

Jerry T Curtis Date: 5/9/2014 7:36:00 PM This Olive, needs no contest to be a winner, it stands alone , in beauty and passion. Thank you for bringing it to my attention. JTC Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 5/10/2014 3:20:00 AM :O?! thanks Jerry.. :) GBU.. :)

Aiyah Torres Date: 5/6/2014 10:51:00 AM awww!!! .. deep write... and full of passion!! ... the petals and its thorn, that made a flower bloomed to its finest.. :O)) very well done, Oive!!! ^_^ Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 5/7/2014 3:38:00 AM Thanks Aiyah.. :)

Casarah Nance Date: 5/6/2014 6:33:00 AM Beautiful. Isn't it amazing how amazing somethings truly are ;) well said beautiful Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 5/10/2014 3:26:00 AM Thank you Casarah.. :) your comments are well appreciated.. :)

Arthur Vaso Date: 5/5/2014 9:14:00 PM BEAUTIFUL simply BEAUTIFUL :) Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 5/10/2014 3:21:00 AM thank you Arthur for the beautiful comment.. :)

Justin Bordner Date: 5/5/2014 8:19:00 PM I read this as being an extraordinary expression of erotic need Olive. Great touch to the words. J.A.B. Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 5/7/2014 3:35:00 AM Thanks much JAB.. :) like every drop by you made.. :)

Paul Callus Date: 5/5/2014 5:30:00 PM Olive_eloi...this was written so passionately; senses intertwined....touch, sight....verging on the sensual. [see what roses can do to you!] this reminds me of some other petals..... // paul Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 5/6/2014 5:22:00 PM Yes, I do...thank you...:)) :P Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 5/6/2014 3:50:00 PM weeee Thank PAul.. :) Im glad you like it.. :) i think i'll take your advice.. :) think it's better then/.. :D