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Delicately, I hold the soft smooth petals Tracing each edge of the curve Gently enough not to render any harm Beckoning is the silky feel of inches swell Can't help to sweat Can't stop to tremble I maximize the wonderful experience Shattering defense with strong willed cause Panting and blowing Breath stopping with each alternate pause Petals bloom in bright bloody red Rockets of joy from a travel hours of thorns The one pistil blossomed with life Made all expectators clap and yell The stamen soothed the petals Tenderly lovingly and caressingly By Olive Eloisa 5:10 pm May 05, 2015 ------------------------ Sponsor Jerry T Curtis Contest Name N/A 2nd place

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Date: 7/17/2015 2:32:00 PM
Ones stem shall arise amidst enlightening grow, sap shall surge in increasing flow. When such forwards in hungered show, it's a delight to grace when petals grow - //xx// hugs forever//James xxxx
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Date: 9/30/2014 5:40:00 PM
One feels exasperated at the beauty of a flowers petals. Reading this poem takes me on another journey, of which I'll recall one day and write my thoughts. Once again wonderfully written poetry, James :) x
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Date: 10/1/2014 1:38:00 AM
thanks much James.. :) I appreciate your comments.. :D
Date: 6/12/2014 5:34:00 AM
Olive this is a beautiful read. It is natural to get different interpretations and feel on different occasions by the same person and still it refreshes. Loved it. Mohan
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Date: 6/14/2014 5:33:00 AM
:) thank you.. :)
Date: 6/10/2014 3:55:00 PM
Worthy of re-reading, Well done on the contest, still as i said before a beautiful poem :)
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Date: 6/11/2014 2:49:00 PM
Thanks you Casarah..:D
Date: 6/10/2014 3:54:00 PM
Erotic..I love it..Congrats again..Your on a roll! BG
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Date: 6/11/2014 2:49:00 PM
woooooh?! i did not intend to be as erotic.. :D thanks BArbara.. :)
Date: 6/10/2014 3:31:00 PM
Congratulations... Olive, enjoying your wins...Linda
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Date: 6/10/2014 2:02:00 PM
Congratulations Olive_eloi!!!! This is a worthy winner:)) // paul
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Date: 6/10/2014 2:48:00 PM
Thank you dearie Paul.. :D hugs and hugs.. :D
Date: 5/10/2014 11:40:00 AM
Hi Olive, This write is so beautiful really beautiful... From beginning to end. I now have a deeper appreciation For rose petals. Thank so much for sharing this write with us here. Great poem. Peace, Deborah
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Date: 5/10/2014 4:44:00 PM
Thanks DEborah.. I appreciate you dropping by.. :) Thanks much.. :)
Date: 5/9/2014 7:36:00 PM
This Olive, needs no contest to be a winner, it stands alone , in beauty and passion. Thank you for bringing it to my attention. JTC
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Date: 5/10/2014 3:20:00 AM
:O?! thanks Jerry.. :) GBU.. :)
Date: 5/6/2014 10:51:00 AM
awww!!! .. deep write... and full of passion!! ... the petals and its thorn, that made a flower bloomed to its finest.. :O)) very well done, Oive!!! ^_^
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/7/2014 3:38:00 AM
Thanks Aiyah.. :)
Date: 5/6/2014 6:33:00 AM
Beautiful. Isn't it amazing how amazing somethings truly are ;) well said beautiful
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/10/2014 3:26:00 AM
Thank you Casarah.. :) your comments are well appreciated.. :)
Date: 5/5/2014 9:14:00 PM
BEAUTIFUL simply BEAUTIFUL :)
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/10/2014 3:21:00 AM
thank you Arthur for the beautiful comment.. :)
Date: 5/5/2014 8:19:00 PM
I read this as being an extraordinary expression of erotic need Olive. Great touch to the words. J.A.B.
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Date: 5/7/2014 3:35:00 AM
Thanks much JAB.. :) like every drop by you made.. :)
Date: 5/5/2014 5:30:00 PM
Olive_eloi...this was written so passionately; senses intertwined....touch, sight....verging on the sensual. [see what roses can do to you!] this reminds me of some other petals..... // paul
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Paul Callus
Date: 5/6/2014 5:22:00 PM
Yes, I do...thank you...:)) :P
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/6/2014 3:50:00 PM
weeee Thank PAul.. :) Im glad you like it.. :) i think i'll take your advice.. :) think it's better then/.. :D

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