Petals

Sky liquid crashing
Enshrined spires, reaching to air
Petals everywhere
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Chircop Avatar
September 10, 2023 at 8:32 AM
Lovely Haiku!
Scorpio Avatar
September 10, 2023 at 8:50 AM
Thank you! Charmaine, I very much appretiate your visits, also your work it is stunning! Regards A.S.
Kavanagh  Avatar
August 20, 2023 at 3:42 AM
A beautiful Haiku A.S. Striking imagery, you have painted some picture here, brilliant, cheers David
Scorpio Avatar
August 20, 2023 at 8:22 AM
Thank you very much David! Regards A.S.
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August 17, 2023 at 1:58 PM
Whoosh! This poem packs a whoosh, can’t describe it any other way, other than filled with colour. Enjoyed dear poet! xomo
Scorpio Avatar
August 17, 2023 at 2:17 PM
MO! missed you! Thank you very much! A.S.
Baker Avatar
August 15, 2023 at 5:10 PM
A fine Haiku, Anonomus. Thanks for sharing. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
Scorpio Avatar
August 19, 2023 at 8:12 PM
Thank you so much Bill! A.S.
Hind Avatar
August 15, 2023 at 10:40 AM
Wow! Good work! You keep on improving all the time. It's always nice to see your creativity at work!
Scorpio Avatar
August 15, 2023 at 11:00 AM
As always your support so much appreciated! Thank you! A.S.
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