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Peruvian Lily

clad in muted shades
of apricot, streaked in pink,
speckled russet-brown
a floriferous delight...
alas, of fragrance deprived!


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© 3rd July 2017

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Susan Ashley

November 30, 2017 at 9:08 PM

Paul, such an exquisite poem. Like some people, the Peruvian lily is a beauty to behold but lacks that certain 'je ne sais quoi' that is so alluring.. A captivating and delightful poem my friend.. Warmest wishes to you.. ~Susan

Paul Callus

December 1, 2017 at 5:39 PM

The Peruvian Lily is truly beautiful, Susan...pity the picture is momentarily hidden. In fact it was the picture which inspired this poem. Once again, I thank you for the lovely comments. Warm regards ~ paul

Lynn Marie

August 19, 2017 at 2:55 AM

One never knows what, if anything lies beneath a pretty exterior and your words, very succinctly, portray this splendidly. Beautiful writing Paul, a joy to read:)

Paul Callus

August 19, 2017 at 8:57 AM

You hit the nail right on the head, Lynn!! Thank you for the insightful comments. So pleased you enjoyed it. Warm regards // paul

Afzal Nusker

July 31, 2017 at 11:25 PM

I learned a new word...floriferous and I love the tanka here.

Paul Callus

August 1, 2017 at 4:48 PM

Thank you for stopping by and for liking my humble offering, Afzal. Regards // paul

Funom Makama

July 19, 2017 at 1:49 PM

You just unzipped the covers of my mind to the unprecedented worship of your adorable lines with a powerful choice of words that can't just be ignored. Showers of your wisdom is well palpated in this page and the only thing I can say is a big WELL DONE! Can't wait to have more of your mental command flowing through my reading mind.

Paul Callus

August 1, 2017 at 4:46 PM

Excuse this late reply to your generous comments, Funom, but somehow your visit skipped my attention! Thank you & regards // paul

Joanna Daniel

July 10, 2017 at 7:54 AM

Wow! Excellent tanka, Paul:) Love the contrary concept of beautiful flowers without fragrance:)

Paul Callus

July 12, 2017 at 4:50 PM

So very pleased that you enjoyed it, Jo:) Thank you!! Regards // paul

Agnes Krampe

July 8, 2017 at 5:28 PM

Beautiful description. I have only seen them in bouquets, never actually growing.

Paul Callus

July 12, 2017 at 4:52 PM

They are beautiful, Agnes, but I miss their lack of fragrance. Thank you for reading and liking. Regards // paul

Eileen Manassian

July 8, 2017 at 11:57 AM

Well, some people are like that, beautiful...but no substance to entice the mind. Beautiful write, dear. As always...

Paul Callus

July 12, 2017 at 4:16 AM

You always read my thoughts well, Eileen! Thank you:) Hugs // paul

Maria Williams

July 4, 2017 at 8:44 AM

Ah this is such a breath of freshness - I love Lillies but have never seen this variety - your descriptive tanka is as fresh and descriptive of the picture. Good luck with the contest...Maria

Paul Callus

July 12, 2017 at 3:17 AM

Thank you, Maria. That picture surpasses my words! Regards // paul

Supraja Kannan

July 4, 2017 at 6:38 AM

So beautifully written Paul... Perfect words and it's a lovely tanka... Good luck in the contest...

Paul Callus

July 12, 2017 at 3:09 AM

Thank you, Supraja. Best regards // paul

Connie Marcum Wong

July 4, 2017 at 4:01 AM

This is a lovely entry Paul. That flower looks like some I saw at K. Gardens in Amsterdam. Beautiful! : )

Paul Callus

July 12, 2017 at 2:56 AM

Yes, I remember that lovely poem of yours, Connie. Thank you for liking this one. Regards // paul

Chris Green

July 3, 2017 at 12:32 PM

This was beautiful my friend, perfect for Kim's contest. Best wishes.

Paul Callus

July 12, 2017 at 2:01 AM

Thank you, Chris. Regards // paul

Suzanne Delaney

July 3, 2017 at 11:36 AM

Lovely description. I often have a fresh bouquet of these in my kitchen. Nice to read your poems again. I decided today I must try to summon back the Muse. Hug from SuZ

Paul Callus

July 3, 2017 at 5:09 PM

Thank you, Suzanne. I see that your muse has not let you down...your latest poem is beautiful. Hugs // paul