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persuasive “ “ “ “ “ “ “ waters in gravitational pull plummeting “ “ “ “ “ “ “ in the midst; a misty rainbow of flamboyant “ “ “ “ “ fall. clouds, mountains, shrubbery “ “ “ “ - the ups and downs of the Catskill school’s Church, his Niagara. mohicans on the ledge…legend of a New York autumn red leaves, white foam, yellow and orange burns my muse is on fire…flames leaping…honey of heavenly art

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Date: 6/22/2025 1:40:00 AM
Innovative layout working hand in hand with beautiful imagery. Congratulations on selection Howard
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/22/2025 10:46:00 AM
Thank you, Howard! Hugs
Date: 6/14/2025 9:37:00 AM
Wish you got better than HM. So nicely done
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/22/2025 10:47:00 AM
I appreciate you so much! This poem was not meant to fit into a frame, however after I started it, the picture of a Falls came to me! I really am thankful for your comment!! Hugs!
Date: 6/14/2025 9:30:00 AM
Congratulations, Poet Fried, on your top contest win with a terrific composition. Wishing you a wonderful weekend.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/22/2025 10:48:00 AM
Thank you, Lasaad! Happy Sunday!
Date: 6/12/2025 7:23:00 PM
Love this one, Kim- gravity is all this reading through my head now, lol, so cool, gorgeous
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/12/2025 7:33:00 PM
Thank you, sweet one!
Date: 6/12/2025 3:46:00 PM
Interesting design. I love that fiery last line
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/12/2025 3:54:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea! I start writing then it starts to take shape. I separated the beginning words, then I had an aha thought of the Falls! :) Hugs

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