Perspectives

Shadowed memories
intermingle with
childhood dreams of 
days long past.

Looking back on
the canon of Time
my dance with youth 
filled my heart with 
happiness 
enveloped by the love
of a caring father and mother.

You danced alongside me
for a time
hand in hand 
until you let go
feeling unloved 
though you never were.

Black moods pulled you
away into a
turbulent tide of
angry undertows
slapping strongly against 
love’s strong currents.

You traded an ocean of love
for a desert of discontent 
and walked away
alone and apart

and I know not why
dear sister.




9/6/2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Wolf Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 12:41 PM
Tragic really. Sorry for the pain it must cause. Unfortunately, I know it well too. Keep the faith, Gershon
Leiser Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 3:48 PM
Thank you, Gershon..
One Avatar
September 8, 2019 at 3:16 PM
Im so sorry Laura and only your sister can answer this.. this is really sad and I can relate to this... great poetry my friend.. always love reading your poems...
Leiser Avatar
September 8, 2019 at 8:57 PM
Thanks for your caring comments, Silent. It’s been a long, hard road with my sister. My father’s recent passing has unfortunately intensified divisions between us. I pray there will be some resolution in time...
Hamilton Avatar
September 6, 2019 at 9:42 PM
So sad Laura and I know it's true, your sister may come around we have to keep hope alive, so well written, loved the imagery!
Leiser Avatar
September 6, 2019 at 9:57 PM
Thank you, John. Your words give me hope. God bless you!
Green Avatar
September 6, 2019 at 5:19 PM
Wow, that was really sad Laura. A heartbreaking poetic tale that will linger with me for a long while. So very sad indeed.
Leiser Avatar
September 6, 2019 at 6:39 PM
Thanks so your comments, Chris. Too bad it is true for me..Of course, there is more to the story, and I do hope my sister changes her mind and heart...
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