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She is Trouble, but she does not want to be. She is a Loaded Gun, That desires to protect. But everyone who handles her keeps tilting her in angles that point her straight at their heads.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Date: 11/20/2018 4:29:00 PM
This is a beautifully written piece!! Awesome work! Welcome to the soup
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Date: 11/9/2018 3:19:00 AM
Oh, this is GOOD! I am reading it for the third time, for the nuances are holding me in captivity. My attention is keen. Welcome to PoetrySoup, Julia. I think you have found your new tribe!
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Date: 11/8/2018 2:20:00 PM
The protective instinct is a very powerful thing. And well expressed in this poem.
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Date: 11/8/2018 1:46:00 PM
Ooh I like it!
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Date: 11/8/2018 1:10:00 PM
Very cool. I like the brevity of your pieces. You say a lot in few words.
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Julia Ford
Date: 11/8/2018 1:59:00 PM
oh my goodness thank you! I'm excited to be sharing my passion with y'all