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Perspective

Outside my window glints today Lighted and pearly as Milky Way Tinted purple just as I expected Where darkened night decayed Now yawning sullenly, suddenly Shrouding glee of morning rising Silencing birds chirping gleefully As cotton clouds turning unruly Pitter-patter, raining on dawning Much alike my yesterday’s dream That spun so much of revelry Only to then abandon me in reality. You are busy gazing at prairies, Winds rustling summer’s revelry As rudderless streams, giggling, Zigzag on terrain shamrock green; You vouch for rainbow unseen Hiding behind obscured skyline, Insist there’s a sound of hello In parting voice of each goodbye Peering in distance on other side Sighting upon a magenta sky Impending joy of golden sunrise. June 26, 2021 Placed 1st: All your (June 27) poetry contest by Brian Strand

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Valsa George

Date: 1/8/2022 4:44:00 AM

This description of the early morning is simply ethereal....Love the expressions 'magenta sky and golden sunrise'. They have become part of my poetic vocabulary ! Thanks a lot Vijay ! 'Vouch for rainbow unseen', as perspective changes everything!

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/7/2021 11:35:00 AM

WoW! Vijay, No matter how dark it is, one’s own perspective is the key. Good entry for the contest, my friend. It looks like a winner to me. Well done:-) Alexis

Judy Ball

Date: 7/4/2021 5:38:00 PM

The way we look at everything is the way we will perceive it to be. Whether it is or not makes no difference, it's what is going on in our own mind that rules how we personally believe it to be. Lovely write my friend. God Bless, JB

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/5/2021 6:36:00 AM

Much appreciate my friend. Many thanks, Judy, for your kind remarks.

Smita Kulkarni

Date: 7/4/2021 12:40:00 PM

I loved the the title "Perspective"! The title itself has so much to learn from!!!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/4/2021 3:34:00 PM

Glad you stopped by. Much appreciate, Smita. Many thanks.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 7/4/2021 9:40:00 AM

Imagine if we all looked at things and life from the same perspective, just a clone of one another, however you splendidly and with passion tell of an individual's perspective - yours, which only goes to say, thank goodness you proved we are all unique, each of us with a different viewpoint. excellent poetry Vijay, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/4/2021 3:33:00 PM

Much appreciate Jennifer. Always a joy to read your comments. Many thanks.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 7/1/2021 10:50:00 PM

I like this one, Vijay, nice use of imagery:)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/4/2021 3:33:00 PM

Thank you Jo--much appreciate.

Mike Gentile

Date: 7/1/2021 11:29:00 AM

The way we look at things makes all the difference. Your Perspective poem i;;lustrates that beautifully and with such splendor!! Well done Vijay!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/4/2021 3:33:00 PM

Thank you Mike. Much appreciate your kind remarks.

Sandra Adams

Date: 6/29/2021 7:23:00 PM

wow... the imagery in this one is breathtakingly beautiful, although you always have had a way to paint a beautiful scene... your poetry never disappoints my friend... best wishes in the contest... hugs :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/30/2021 6:03:00 AM

Thanks for your visit and wonderful comments. Always a delight. Much appreciate Sandy--many thanks.

Paul Callus

Date: 6/29/2021 3:15:00 PM

Your imagery never lets you down, Vijay! You take my breath away! Regards // paul

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/30/2021 6:02:00 AM

So very kind of you Paul. Many thanks. Regards.

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 6/29/2021 2:19:00 PM

This is so pretty! Great job Vijay, very well written, I love this! ! <3 ~BJ

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/30/2021 6:02:00 AM

Much appreciate BJ--many thanks.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/29/2021 12:26:00 PM

- What a beautiful picture this gives my eyes, Vijay :) - Wonderfully written :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/30/2021 6:02:00 AM

Thank you Anne-Lise. Much appreciate.

Joseph May

Date: 6/29/2021 4:48:00 AM

Very well crafted Vijay, best wishes

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/29/2021 6:11:00 AM

Thank you Joseph--much appreciate.

Aniruddha Pathak

Date: 6/28/2021 10:03:00 PM

Breathtaking dear painter poet, sometime I wonder if you pen a poem or paint it. Yet, what a silly thing to ask, is not it the same thing? I'd be surprised only if you do not win, congrats anyway.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/29/2021 6:11:00 AM

So very kind of you Aniruddha. Much appreciate--many thanks.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 6/28/2021 7:49:00 PM

A wonderful poem on Perspective. Congratulations!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/29/2021 6:11:00 AM

Thank you Christuraj. Much appreciate.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/28/2021 12:12:00 PM

I like your perspective. ;0)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/29/2021 6:10:00 AM

Thank you Richard.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 6/27/2021 9:22:00 PM

This is so beautifully uplifting; thanks.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/28/2021 4:16:00 AM

Thank you MLK--much appreciate.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 6/27/2021 7:39:00 PM

Your lovely, emotional poem describes contrasting outlooks as rain and rainbows--with hopes of a blending at the end. Janice

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/28/2021 4:16:00 AM

Much appreciate Janice--many thanks.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 6/27/2021 7:16:00 PM

"Peering in the distance, on other side, impending joy of a golden sunrise" Yes, such beauty to behold indeed. The images you paint are simply breathtaking my dear sweet friend. My heart is smiling. :) Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/28/2021 4:15:00 AM

Thank you my friend. Much appreciate, as always.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 6/27/2021 6:47:00 PM

I love this. Exquisite! A joy to behold. Love it. God bless you always, Love, Gina

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/28/2021 4:15:00 AM

Thank you Gina. Much appreciate.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/27/2021 1:18:00 PM

such a colorful poem!! Hope you get a win with this.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/28/2021 4:15:00 AM

Thank you Andrea. Much appreciate.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 6/27/2021 9:59:00 AM

It can be simply breathtaking watching the horizon climb into a beautiful ruby sky, thanks Vijay, :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/27/2021 11:42:00 AM

Much appreciate, Vienna--many thanks.

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 6/27/2021 2:36:00 AM

Lovely images this one caught my eye: You vouch for rainbow unseen Hiding behind obscured skyline, Lovely....Delice

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/27/2021 8:32:00 AM

Nice when some people can vouch for the rainbow unseen. Thanks for your visit and comments, Delice. Much appreciate.

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 6/26/2021 11:39:00 PM

Beautiful composition highlighting dreams and reality.if only we could live in dreams and reality was not so bad... All the best for contest. Enjoy your weekend

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/27/2021 8:31:00 AM

Glad you stopped by with your kind remarks. Much appreciate. Many thanks, Rama.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 6/26/2021 11:53:00 AM

Incomparable imagery, superb verses, certainly a winner. Good luck, my friend, Vijay. Blessings.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/27/2021 8:30:00 AM

Thank you my friend. Much appreciate your kind remarks.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/26/2021 10:45:00 AM

Superb imagery as is your trademark Vijay, Good luck in the contest, hope weekend is going well. Tom

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/27/2021 8:30:00 AM

Thank you Tom. Much appreciate, as always.