Vijay Pandit Poet Free verse

Perspective

Outside my window glints today
Lighted and pearly as Milky Way
Tinted purple just as I expected
Where darkened night decayed

Now yawning sullenly, suddenly
Shrouding glee of morning rising
Silencing birds chirping gleefully 
As cotton clouds turning unruly
Pitter-patter, raining on dawning

Much alike my yesterday’s dream
That spun so much of revelry
Only to then abandon me in reality.

You are busy gazing at prairies,
Winds rustling summer’s revelry
As rudderless streams, giggling, 
Zigzag on terrain shamrock green;

You vouch for rainbow unseen
Hiding behind obscured skyline,
Insist there’s a sound of hello
In parting voice of each goodbye

Peering in distance on other side
Sighting upon a magenta sky
Impending joy of golden sunrise.

June 26, 2021
Placed 1st: All your (June 27) poetry contest by Brian Strand

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Valsa George January 8, 2022 at 4:44 AM This description of the early morning is simply ethereal....Love the expressions 'magenta sky and golden sunrise'. They have become part of my poetic vocabulary ! Thanks a lot Vijay ! 'Vouch for rainbow unseen', as perspective changes everything!

Alexis Y. July 7, 2021 at 11:35 AM WoW! Vijay, No matter how dark it is, one’s own perspective is the key. Good entry for the contest, my friend. It looks like a winner to me. Well done:-) Alexis

Judy Ball July 4, 2021 at 5:38 PM The way we look at everything is the way we will perceive it to be. Whether it is or not makes no difference, it's what is going on in our own mind that rules how we personally believe it to be. Lovely write my friend. God Bless, JB Vijay Pandit July 5, 2021 at 6:36 AM Much appreciate my friend. Many thanks, Judy, for your kind remarks.

Smita Kulkarni July 4, 2021 at 12:40 PM I loved the the title "Perspective"! The title itself has so much to learn from!!! Vijay Pandit July 4, 2021 at 3:34 PM Glad you stopped by. Much appreciate, Smita. Many thanks.

Jennifer Proxenos July 4, 2021 at 9:40 AM Imagine if we all looked at things and life from the same perspective, just a clone of one another, however you splendidly and with passion tell of an individual's perspective - yours, which only goes to say, thank goodness you proved we are all unique, each of us with a different viewpoint. excellent poetry Vijay, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Vijay Pandit July 4, 2021 at 3:33 PM Much appreciate Jennifer. Always a joy to read your comments. Many thanks.

Joanna Daniel July 1, 2021 at 10:50 PM I like this one, Vijay, nice use of imagery:) Vijay Pandit July 4, 2021 at 3:33 PM Thank you Jo--much appreciate.

Mike Gentile July 1, 2021 at 11:29 AM The way we look at things makes all the difference. Your Perspective poem i;;lustrates that beautifully and with such splendor!! Well done Vijay! Vijay Pandit July 4, 2021 at 3:33 PM Thank you Mike. Much appreciate your kind remarks.

Sandra Adams June 29, 2021 at 7:23 PM wow... the imagery in this one is breathtakingly beautiful, although you always have had a way to paint a beautiful scene... your poetry never disappoints my friend... best wishes in the contest... hugs :) Vijay Pandit June 30, 2021 at 6:03 AM Thanks for your visit and wonderful comments. Always a delight. Much appreciate Sandy--many thanks.

Paul Callus June 29, 2021 at 3:15 PM Your imagery never lets you down, Vijay! You take my breath away! Regards // paul Vijay Pandit June 30, 2021 at 6:02 AM So very kind of you Paul. Many thanks. Regards.

Bj Legros Kelley June 29, 2021 at 2:19 PM This is so pretty! Great job Vijay, very well written, I love this! ! <3 ~BJ Vijay Pandit June 30, 2021 at 6:02 AM Much appreciate BJ--many thanks.

Anne-Lise Andresen June 29, 2021 at 12:26 PM - What a beautiful picture this gives my eyes, Vijay :) - Wonderfully written :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Vijay Pandit June 30, 2021 at 6:02 AM Thank you Anne-Lise. Much appreciate.

Joseph May June 29, 2021 at 4:48 AM Very well crafted Vijay, best wishes Vijay Pandit June 29, 2021 at 6:11 AM Thank you Joseph--much appreciate.

Aniruddha Pathak June 28, 2021 at 10:03 PM Breathtaking dear painter poet, sometime I wonder if you pen a poem or paint it. Yet, what a silly thing to ask, is not it the same thing? I'd be surprised only if you do not win, congrats anyway. Vijay Pandit June 29, 2021 at 6:11 AM So very kind of you Aniruddha. Much appreciate--many thanks.

Christuraj Alex June 28, 2021 at 7:49 PM A wonderful poem on Perspective. Congratulations! Vijay Pandit June 29, 2021 at 6:11 AM Thank you Christuraj. Much appreciate.

Richard Lamoureux June 28, 2021 at 12:12 PM I like your perspective. ;0) Vijay Pandit June 29, 2021 at 6:10 AM Thank you Richard.

M. L. Kiser June 27, 2021 at 9:22 PM This is so beautifully uplifting; thanks. Vijay Pandit June 28, 2021 at 4:16 AM Thank you MLK--much appreciate.

Janice Canerdy June 27, 2021 at 7:39 PM Your lovely, emotional poem describes contrasting outlooks as rain and rainbows--with hopes of a blending at the end. Janice Vijay Pandit June 28, 2021 at 4:16 AM Much appreciate Janice--many thanks.

Brandy Nicole June 27, 2021 at 7:16 PM "Peering in the distance, on other side, impending joy of a golden sunrise" Yes, such beauty to behold indeed. The images you paint are simply breathtaking my dear sweet friend. My heart is smiling. :) Brandy Vijay Pandit June 28, 2021 at 4:15 AM Thank you my friend. Much appreciate, as always.

Regina Mcintosh June 27, 2021 at 6:47 PM I love this. Exquisite! A joy to behold. Love it. God bless you always, Love, Gina Vijay Pandit June 28, 2021 at 4:15 AM Thank you Gina. Much appreciate.

Andrea Dietrich June 27, 2021 at 1:18 PM such a colorful poem!! Hope you get a win with this. Vijay Pandit June 28, 2021 at 4:15 AM Thank you Andrea. Much appreciate.

Mystic Rose Rose June 27, 2021 at 9:59 AM It can be simply breathtaking watching the horizon climb into a beautiful ruby sky, thanks Vijay, :) Vijay Pandit June 27, 2021 at 11:42 AM Much appreciate, Vienna--many thanks.

Delice Arleen Skelly June 27, 2021 at 2:36 AM Lovely images this one caught my eye: You vouch for rainbow unseen Hiding behind obscured skyline, Lovely....Delice Vijay Pandit June 27, 2021 at 8:32 AM Nice when some people can vouch for the rainbow unseen. Thanks for your visit and comments, Delice. Much appreciate.

Rama Balasubramanian June 26, 2021 at 11:39 PM Beautiful composition highlighting dreams and reality.if only we could live in dreams and reality was not so bad... All the best for contest. Enjoy your weekend Vijay Pandit June 27, 2021 at 8:31 AM Glad you stopped by with your kind remarks. Much appreciate. Many thanks, Rama.

Demetrios Trifiatis June 26, 2021 at 11:53 AM Incomparable imagery, superb verses, certainly a winner. Good luck, my friend, Vijay. Blessings. Vijay Pandit June 27, 2021 at 8:30 AM Thank you my friend. Much appreciate your kind remarks.

Tom Cunningham June 26, 2021 at 10:45 AM Superb imagery as is your trademark Vijay, Good luck in the contest, hope weekend is going well. Tom Vijay Pandit June 27, 2021 at 8:30 AM Thank you Tom. Much appreciate, as always.

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