Personal Scenes of Mine

A walking track through the forest,
shrouded by giants, providing shade,
with broken boughs, leaf litter and life,
and a cool mountain stream in a glade.

This stranger can only see beauty,
where many see nothing at all,
it may be complex of a flower,
or a trivial meaningless call.

But I’m not a casual observer.
The big picture is far from my mind.
I don’t need a grandiose view,
just the reach of close-by unrefined.

It’s magnificent scenery,
gaudy colours with the greenery,
sustaining birds and the native bee,
among the trees and the shrubbery.

Maidenhair, copperhead, yellow-ochre.
Ornithorhynchus and xanthorrhoea.
Antechinus, phasmid, orb weaver,
scenery hidden out of the way.

And so as my journey progresses,
my mind and my eyes grow so keen
for sight of one more hidden treasure,
or the privilege of knowing one’s been.

It’s wonderful knowing,
knowledge of the forest keeps growing,
whether it’s floral or an echo ping,
my scenery is a wonderful thing.
It’s magnificent scenery,
gaudy colours with the greenery,
sustaining birds and the native bee,
among the trees and the shrubbery.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 4/4/2019 1:51:00 PM
I can feel your love for nature Lindsay - so heartfelt are the scenes you describe - so evident that you are most comfortable in this green environment with colour bursting and birds humming and singing! Another wonderful poem! Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 4/4/2019 5:32:00 PM
Hello Jennifer … the bush is my paradise Jennifer. There is so much to appreciate in all its natural beauty. I consider everything to have a purpose and this aids our existence - once again, thank you Jennifer - Lindsay
Date: 2/23/2019 11:46:00 AM
Makes me want to take a walk in the forest but now we are cold and knee deep in snow. Been long cold winter and still really cold out there. No walks yet. love phyl
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Date: 2/23/2019 6:44:00 PM
Hello Phyllis … you would love it. We don't have snow here, even in winter, but right now it has been very dry. More like autumn than summer. Thank you Phyllis - Lindsay
Date: 2/18/2019 9:14:00 PM
Nice, I took this walk with you!
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Date: 2/22/2019 4:49:00 PM
Thank you Timothy. I'm pleased that you enjoyed it - Lindsay
Date: 2/17/2019 8:08:00 PM
I agree it is all quite fascinating. I've seen ants in Germany perform a ritual dance for a dead colleague before plucking out and trundling off with its antennae, and honeybees in California plucking out magnolia stamen - much more fascinating to actually see than to read about! Well caught and reported! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 2/22/2019 4:48:00 PM
G'day Rico … the insect world would teach us more about specie survival than any scientist focusing entirely on humanity interests. Greed will end human domination - thanks Rico - Lindsay
Date: 2/16/2019 1:23:00 PM
G'Day Lindsay: Splendid write and I felt that I was along for the walk! Thanks as always for your gracious comments on some of my recent concoctions. Good on you always, my friend - Bob
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Date: 2/22/2019 4:45:00 PM
Hello Bob … bush walking with the interest at heart of where you are really does help clear a cluttered mind - thanks Bob - Lindsay
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