Balveen Cheema Poet Monorhyme

Personal Memories

Many years ago I read tales to my grand mother
As you now read with love to your grandfather
I fathom my childhood joys with my grandmother
Helped me to strengthen my old rickety ladder 
Your gas bag ripples me with rib tickling laughter

March 19, 2016
Contest: Personal Memories, Picture # 3
Sponsor: Laura Loo

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Eve Roper April 4, 2016 at 10:37 AM Balveen, congratulations on your win!!!! Balveen Cheema April 4, 2016 at 11:01 AM Thanks Eve!

Paul Callus April 3, 2016 at 8:43 AM Well done, Balveen! Congrats on this lovely win! I also used to read to my grandparents, and I hope that when age takes its toll on me and my eyesight may deteriorate, someone will do the same for me:) ~ Regards // paul Balveen Cheema April 4, 2016 at 8:15 AM The goodness carries on, Paul! Thanks for congratulating me!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma March 31, 2016 at 12:35 AM Sorry Balveen the comment for Brian landed up here.. yours is an amazing one.. big congrats.. Balveen Cheema March 31, 2016 at 9:15 AM Don't you worry! Thanks for the compliment!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma March 31, 2016 at 12:34 AM Congrats on ur deserved big win with this awesome write Brian..

Beautiful Scars March 30, 2016 at 9:20 PM Balveen, this touched my heart, thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo Balveen Cheema March 31, 2016 at 9:16 AM Thanks Luloo!

Andrea Dietrich March 26, 2016 at 9:14 PM CUTE, Balveen. Great job. Balveen Cheema March 26, 2016 at 9:55 PM Thanks Andrea!