Brian Davey Poet Monorhyme

Personal Memories

Personal Memories




                     Tender, tiny hands taught with strings so very, very smart...

                  With guidance and understanding given so freely from the start...

                No discipline or anger shown only pure love straight from the heart...

               A bond between these two, the  Dynamic Duo, never to be torn apart...

              Unblemished and so beautiful, this perfect painted portrait of family art...




                                         \   March 17, 2016 (picture #2)

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Eve Roper April 4, 2016 at 10:35 AM Wonderful write, Brian, congratulations on your win!!!! Brian Davey April 7, 2016 at 4:46 AM Thank you very much Eve

Sandra Haight April 1, 2016 at 7:03 PM Congratulations on your placement in Laura's contest, Brian. Nicely done! Sandra Brian Davey April 7, 2016 at 4:46 AM Thank you Sandra it was an honor to do something so personal for her and to have it well received

Teddy Kimathi March 31, 2016 at 3:28 AM Beautiful flow of rhymes!!! Congrats Brian, for your WIN in the contest!!! ;-) Brian Davey March 31, 2016 at 1:41 PM Thank you Teddy I am happy that you enjoyed my write Brian Davey March 31, 2016 at 1:40 PM Thank you Teddy I am happy that you enjoyed my write

Balveen Cheema March 31, 2016 at 1:54 AM Congrats on your deserving win, Brian! Brian Davey March 31, 2016 at 1:40 PM Thank you very much I really enjoyed this contest

Dr. Upma A. Sharma March 31, 2016 at 12:33 AM Congrats on ur deserved top podium with this awesome write Brian .. Brian Davey March 31, 2016 at 1:39 PM Thank you so much

Beautiful Scars March 30, 2016 at 9:19 PM Brian, this warmed my heart immensely and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo Brian Davey March 31, 2016 at 1:38 PM Your welcome and the best prize I could receive was in your comment because that is what this contest was about and I am so happy I got the chance to represent your family in a good way, it means the world to me that you enjoyed it so much! Thank you

Timothy Hicks March 18, 2016 at 8:40 PM Beautifully sentimental work, Brian. Flowed extremely well. I'm curious about this "dynamic duo" ... they sound like they could be a title for my nieces, who are but a year apart ... Brian Davey March 23, 2016 at 4:50 AM I think the world has many different Dynamic Duo's your niece's being two of them. I based this off of the pic for the contest that shows the two I've written about. Thanks again my friend

Meenakshi Raina March 18, 2016 at 6:52 AM Lovely lines... Brian Davey March 18, 2016 at 5:23 PM Thank you