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Persimmons, Porcupines and Guns

Her lips were of Persimmon pink Her nails of Porcupine And when she puckered up to kiss You’d better which your spine! Her eyes could penetrate the night Like lasers from a gun and when she set her eyes on you Oh boy, you’d better run! Let’s not forget about her feet At “Bunny” speed, no less She’ll hop right in and nibble when she finds out your address Persimmons, porcupines and guns And with those Rabbit’s feet She’ll chase and kiss and scratch and burn What might she like to eat!

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Date: 1/18/2022 9:50:00 PM
Mike, maybe keep a lucky rabbit's foot, preferably hers, to slow her down a bit, delightful imagination, love it . . . : )
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/19/2022 4:10:00 AM
Thank you Indiana, that was a fun frolic of nonsense to lighten up the day xxoo
Date: 10/26/2021 9:20:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning poem, Mike , silly and enjoying read. Hugs Eve
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Mike Gentile
Date: 10/27/2021 3:30:00 AM
Thank so much Eve xxoo
Date: 10/26/2021 10:24:00 AM
Err. I've changed my mind Mike she's all yours, congratulations on your win. Tom
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Mike Gentile
Date: 10/26/2021 1:31:00 PM
Well! Thanks Tom!!
Date: 10/26/2021 5:54:00 AM
I truly enjoyed this, Mike. I laughed out loud several times. Great story-telling as well! Congratulations on your placement. All the very best, Charlie
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Mike Gentile
Date: 10/26/2021 6:15:00 AM
Thanks so much Charlie !!
Date: 9/8/2021 7:26:00 PM
If this is nonsense, I must be losing it, Mike. Somehow I find it all very logical! ~ Shows to Go you, Gershon
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/9/2021 7:25:00 AM
Thanks GW!! I guess there's some logic there too!!
Date: 9/8/2021 1:06:00 PM
Hmmm...I don't think she is my type, Mike, but glad you entered this funny poem into Charles's contest. Best of luck with Miss "Bunny."
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/8/2021 1:11:00 PM
Thanks much Milton !!
Date: 9/8/2021 11:19:00 AM
Truly in the spirit of contest theme, Mike. Well done. All the best.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/8/2021 11:34:00 AM
Thank you Vijay, it was a fun contest theme!
Date: 9/8/2021 10:59:00 AM
Hello Mike, I would not like to meet her anywhere. She is dangerous. Happy Wednesday. Darlene
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/9/2021 10:10:00 AM
Hello Mike, too bad she is the way she is. Happy Thursday. xx-oo.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/8/2021 11:34:00 AM
Yes she is Darlene, Happy Wednesday xxoo
Date: 9/8/2021 10:39:00 AM
My kind of girl lol. Good entry Mike, good luck in the contest. Tom
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/8/2021 11:35:00 AM
You can have her Tom, I'll send her over, thanks!

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