Persian

persian rug holds head
and blonde wooden floor, the fur ~
black persian kitty snores

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Hiya Sharma

Date: 8/29/2023 2:25:00 AM

Awwn, adorable imagery here, loving the kitty vibes! Persian rugs and Persian kitty, wow.. What a brilliant wordplay.. :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/29/2023 8:45:00 AM

Thank you, Hiya! Enjoyed your comment!

Yann Rolland

Date: 8/28/2023 4:04:00 PM

so adorable, persian inspires you the best details, i loved this haiku

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/28/2023 8:35:00 PM

Thanks, Yann! He surely does!

Silent One

Date: 8/28/2023 3:11:00 AM

Great imagery! Great use of words to portray your haiku..

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/28/2023 1:37:00 PM

Thank you, Silent!

Christina Bowring

Date: 8/27/2023 8:05:00 PM

A very well penned Haiku Kim. Enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/28/2023 1:38:00 PM

Thank you, Christina!

Valsa George

Date: 8/27/2023 7:55:00 PM

I know Persian rugs are so popular, but don't know much about Persian kitties ! Beautiful haiku, dear Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/28/2023 1:39:00 PM

Thank you, Valsa! My son’s kitty is so quiet!

Panagiota Romios

Date: 8/27/2023 5:00:00 PM

Very beautiful Ki. Pangie

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/27/2023 6:41:00 PM

Thanks, Pangie! :)

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 8/27/2023 4:53:00 PM

Adorable haiku of your sweet snoring kitty :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/27/2023 6:41:00 PM

My son’s :) Visiting

The Situation

Date: 8/27/2023 2:44:00 PM

Counted to see if you followed sylables to see if you followed the rules

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/27/2023 6:42:00 PM

Within :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/27/2023 12:55:00 PM

A creative/fun Haiku write. A fun read. Have a great day/week.............

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/27/2023 2:40:00 PM

Hope you get your snooze in too on this Sunday :)

Jeff Connelly

Date: 8/27/2023 8:56:00 AM

Haiku at its best!!! Thanks

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/27/2023 9:52:00 AM

Thanks so much!!

Eve Roper

Date: 8/27/2023 8:50:00 AM

Love the imagery you created on this Haiku. I love Persian rugs and not to fond of Persian cat. Used to have a white Persian cat when I was younger and it just pee all over the place. She didn't want to use the kitty litter.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/27/2023 9:52:00 AM

Wow…that would be terrible! Thank you!