Persian

persian rug holds head
and blonde wooden floor, the fur ~
black persian kitty snores

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Hiya Sharma

August 29, 2023 at 2:25 AM

Awwn, adorable imagery here, loving the kitty vibes! Persian rugs and Persian kitty, wow.. What a brilliant wordplay.. :)

Kim Rodrigues

August 29, 2023 at 8:45 AM

Thank you, Hiya! Enjoyed your comment!

Yann Rolland

August 28, 2023 at 4:04 PM

so adorable, persian inspires you the best details, i loved this haiku

Kim Rodrigues

August 28, 2023 at 8:35 PM

Thanks, Yann! He surely does!

Silent One

August 28, 2023 at 3:11 AM

Great imagery! Great use of words to portray your haiku..

Kim Rodrigues

August 28, 2023 at 1:37 PM

Thank you, Silent!

Christina Bowring

August 27, 2023 at 8:05 PM

A very well penned Haiku Kim. Enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing.

Kim Rodrigues

August 28, 2023 at 1:38 PM

Thank you, Christina!

Valsa George

August 27, 2023 at 7:55 PM

I know Persian rugs are so popular, but don't know much about Persian kitties ! Beautiful haiku, dear Kim.

Kim Rodrigues

August 28, 2023 at 1:39 PM

Thank you, Valsa! My son’s kitty is so quiet!

Panagiota Romios

August 27, 2023 at 5:00 PM

Very beautiful Ki. Pangie

Kim Rodrigues

August 27, 2023 at 6:41 PM

Thanks, Pangie! :)

Michelle Faulkner

August 27, 2023 at 4:53 PM

Adorable haiku of your sweet snoring kitty :)

Kim Rodrigues

August 27, 2023 at 6:41 PM

My son’s :) Visiting

The Situation

August 27, 2023 at 2:44 PM

Counted to see if you followed sylables to see if you followed the rules

Kim Rodrigues

August 27, 2023 at 6:42 PM

Within :)

Paula Goldsmith

August 27, 2023 at 12:55 PM

A creative/fun Haiku write. A fun read. Have a great day/week.............

Kim Rodrigues

August 27, 2023 at 2:40 PM

Hope you get your snooze in too on this Sunday :)

Jeff Connelly

August 27, 2023 at 8:56 AM

Haiku at its best!!! Thanks

Kim Rodrigues

August 27, 2023 at 9:52 AM

Thanks so much!!

Eve Roper

August 27, 2023 at 8:50 AM

Love the imagery you created on this Haiku. I love Persian rugs and not to fond of Persian cat. Used to have a white Persian cat when I was younger and it just pee all over the place. She didn't want to use the kitty litter.

Kim Rodrigues

August 27, 2023 at 9:52 AM

Wow…that would be terrible! Thank you!