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Perpetually Lost

Of the many roads that I have taken
the many words which I have forsaken 
Never could my passion bring 
The lonely heart from which my cistern drinks

Gloom, the comfort of my tears
Tears, the instrument of my fears
Fear, the ransom paid of daring to dream 
Dreams, the reward for all my gloomy ideals 

Come! Feel the bronzie-blood upon my sleeves 
Tilting Forcibly in  that brazen breeze
Groaning for you to release thee
Begging in silence, pleading  devotee....

          Floating,
                     Hoping, 
                                  Wandering, 
                                               Despairing 


                                                 ,Fearing
                                     ,Soothing
                          ,Exhaling
            , Calming ...


Once again, once, .... again
What more can I attain
Must I dare to say
Drifting, 
                slowly, 
                             dis-mem-ber-ed  prey


Date : 4 Feb 2016 ( Inspired by Beethovens Moonlight Sonata )

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/9/2016 12:48:00 PM
Absolutely brilliant and beautiful. A great 7 for me friend.
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Sizwe Hlabisa
Date: 5/9/2016 1:35:00 PM
Thanks Funom... you are very kind. One gets inspired listening to great music
Date: 2/16/2016 10:27:00 PM
Sizwe, thank you for supporting my comment. That was nice of you. Love LINDA
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Sizwe Hlabisa
Date: 2/18/2016 2:39:00 PM
Thanks so much Linda
Date: 2/8/2016 3:56:00 PM
that was quite an inspiration you got listening to that music. Wow!! bet the judge will really enjoy this one.
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Sizwe Hlabisa
Date: 2/9/2016 2:47:00 PM
Thanks Andrea :-)
Date: 2/7/2016 7:42:00 AM
Congratulations on you placement in the lost contest for this well penned poem.
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Sizwe Hlabisa
Date: 2/8/2016 1:59:00 AM
Thank you very much
Date: 2/6/2016 11:57:00 PM
Sizwe, congratulations on your win in my lost contest, your poem is outstanding and I loved your layout ~
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Sizwe Hlabisa
Date: 2/8/2016 1:59:00 AM
Great contest... thanks for the win
Date: 2/6/2016 4:40:00 PM
Sizwe, Congrats on your lovely "LOST" win. LINDA
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Sizwe Hlabisa
Date: 2/8/2016 2:00:00 AM
Thank you

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