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Perpetual Love

Perpetual Love
True love is an eternal flame that glows, igniting special hearts forevermore; despite all odds, this fiery passion grows. A bright beacon shining through darkest night, ’twas gift-wrapped by angels weaving moonlight. Surpassing the test of time ‘twill endure; a tower of strength when adversity sows.
Infused with stardust's blaze from inner space, and forged in sacred fire by divine design, we’re spellbound in love’s warm honeyed embrace. Though bodies die, love always will survive… pure mystical life force infinitely alive. A rare flower, when love blooms it’s a sign of God’s heav'nly-blessed, perpetual grace.
08-11-2018 Contest: Rhyme Time 6 - Verses of Metaphors Sponsor: Laura Loo Placement: 1st

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Date: 11/2/2018 4:01:00 AM
Hi Pandita, congratulations on your win with this beautiful poem. The talent shines through in your metaphoric creativity. Such wonderful phrasing, the love flows from the page. This is excellent poetry, it makes the heart sing and brings this reader peace. It has to be a fave. Have a wonderful Friday. Love and Hugs....Mike. XX
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 11/2/2018 2:16:00 PM
Hi Mike, many thanks for your wonderful compliments and I am so happy you enjoyed reading it! Hope you are enjoying a beautiful day, my friend! Love and hugs. Pandita
Date: 9/11/2018 1:10:00 PM
Beautiful write Pandita..Congrats on your win
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 9/13/2018 12:11:00 PM
Hi Joseph, thank you so much, my friend for your wonderful supportive words! Have a great day! Love and hugs. Pandita
Date: 9/11/2018 5:59:00 AM
I always love using stardust in my poems at times too! beautifully expressed all around...thank you for your participation and congratulations on your placement...:)-luloo
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 9/13/2018 12:10:00 PM
My dear Laura, I am so thrilled that you enjoyed this poem and placed it so highly in your contest - thank you so very much for this great honor! Have a beautiful day! Hugs and love. Pandita
Date: 8/29/2018 12:46:00 AM
Wow, a timeless and breathtaking rhyme, dear friend.. So magnificent!! Absolutely love this masterpiece.. Many blessings, dear friend..
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 8/29/2018 12:47:00 PM
Hi Robertina, many thanks for your wonderful compliments and I am so happy you enjoyed reading it! Hope you are enjoying a beautiful day, my friend! Love and hugs. Pandita
Date: 8/23/2018 7:27:00 PM
"Pure mystical life force so alive..." Such a lovely, yet powerful line, Pandita. Exquisite poesy. Should do great in the contest. Best wishes, Gershon
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 8/26/2018 11:17:00 AM
Hi Gershon, thank you so much for your wonderful compliments and support, my friend! Have a lovely day! Hugs and love. Pandita
Date: 8/15/2018 6:20:00 AM
True love lasts all eternity. A beautifully written poem of love, Pandita. Best wishes for the contest. Hugs. T.J
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 8/15/2018 1:12:00 PM
Hi TJ, I thank you for your wonderful compliments! I am encouraged by your words! Hugs and love. Pandita
Date: 8/15/2018 3:28:00 AM
yes true love is timeless, love your poem, Pandita
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 8/15/2018 1:11:00 PM
Hi Harry, thank you so very much for your complimentary words and continued support for my work! Have a great day. Pandita
Date: 8/15/2018 12:07:00 AM
Soothingly beautiful, this poem. I enjoyed reading. Best of luck in the contest.
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 8/15/2018 1:10:00 PM
Many thanks, ML, for your wonderful compliments and I am happy you enjoyed reading it! Hope you are having a great day! Pandita
Date: 8/13/2018 7:16:00 PM
A perpetual pleasing poem, Pandita...nicely arranged my friend...a Fav...love & light...^WW^
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 8/14/2018 9:38:00 AM
Hi WW, thank you so much for your kind compliments and support, my friend! Have a lovely day! Hugs and love. Pandita
Date: 8/12/2018 12:57:00 PM
Very nice my dear Pandita...
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 8/19/2018 11:32:00 PM
Pandita, your second stanza is truly magnificent...
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 8/12/2018 1:04:00 PM
Thank you - thank you, dear Pashang! Hope you are enjoying a beautiful day! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 8/12/2018 4:19:00 AM
A beautiful well written verse on love Pandita. Good luck. Tom
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 8/12/2018 1:03:00 PM
Tom, thank you my friend for your lovely compliments which I very much appreciate! Blessings, hugs, and love. Pandita
Date: 8/11/2018 6:48:00 PM
Wow great line "angels weaving moonlight" so pure and radiant, best of luck in the contest!
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 8/11/2018 6:52:00 PM
Awwww - thank you so much Michelle for visiting and leaving me your awesome compliments! Have a beautiful weekend! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 8/11/2018 3:22:00 PM
A beautiful poem of perpetual love, Pandita. Good luck in the contest, I think this will do well. John
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 8/11/2018 3:29:00 PM
Hello John, thank you so very much for your kind compliments which I always appreciate! Hope you have an enjoyable weekend! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 8/11/2018 2:51:00 PM
I feel like an angelic being penned this one, Pandita. Good luck in the contest, but you will not need it. This beautiful missive speaks for itself, you, and your muse.
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 8/11/2018 3:10:00 PM
Caren, thank you kindly for you sweet, encouraging compliments! Hope you are enjoying a great weekend! Love and hugs. Pandita