Pandita Sietesantos Poet Rhyme

Perpetual Love

Perpetual Love

True love is an eternal flame that glows, 
igniting special hearts forevermore; 
despite all odds, this fiery passion grows. 
A bright beacon shining through darkest night,
’twas gift-wrapped by angels weaving moonlight.
Surpassing the test of time ‘twill endure; 
a tower of strength when adversity sows.

Infused with stardust's blaze from inner space, 
and forged in sacred fire by divine design, 
we’re spellbound in love’s warm honeyed embrace.
Though bodies die, love always will survive…
pure mystical life force infinitely alive.
A rare flower, when love blooms it’s a sign  
of God’s heav'nly-blessed, perpetual grace.

08-11-2018

Contest:     Rhyme Time 6 - Verses of Metaphors 
Sponsor:    Laura Loo
Placement: 1st

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Vladislav Raven November 2, 2018 at 4:01 AM Hi Pandita, congratulations on your win with this beautiful poem. The talent shines through in your metaphoric creativity. Such wonderful phrasing, the love flows from the page. This is excellent poetry, it makes the heart sing and brings this reader peace. It has to be a fave. Have a wonderful Friday. Love and Hugs....Mike. XX Pandita Sietesantos November 2, 2018 at 2:16 PM Hi Mike, many thanks for your wonderful compliments and I am so happy you enjoyed reading it! Hope you are enjoying a beautiful day, my friend! Love and hugs. Pandita

Joseph May September 11, 2018 at 1:10 PM Beautiful write Pandita..Congrats on your win Pandita Sietesantos September 13, 2018 at 12:11 PM Hi Joseph, thank you so much, my friend for your wonderful supportive words! Have a great day! Love and hugs. Pandita

Beautiful Scars September 11, 2018 at 5:59 AM I always love using stardust in my poems at times too! beautifully expressed all around...thank you for your participation and congratulations on your placement...:)-luloo Pandita Sietesantos September 13, 2018 at 12:10 PM My dear Laura, I am so thrilled that you enjoyed this poem and placed it so highly in your contest - thank you so very much for this great honor! Have a beautiful day! Hugs and love. Pandita

Robertina B. August 29, 2018 at 12:46 AM Wow, a timeless and breathtaking rhyme, dear friend.. So magnificent!! Absolutely love this masterpiece.. Many blessings, dear friend.. Pandita Sietesantos August 29, 2018 at 12:47 PM Hi Robertina, many thanks for your wonderful compliments and I am so happy you enjoyed reading it! Hope you are enjoying a beautiful day, my friend! Love and hugs. Pandita

Gershon Wolf August 23, 2018 at 7:27 PM "Pure mystical life force so alive..." Such a lovely, yet powerful line, Pandita. Exquisite poesy. Should do great in the contest. Best wishes, Gershon Pandita Sietesantos August 26, 2018 at 11:17 AM Hi Gershon, thank you so much for your wonderful compliments and support, my friend! Have a lovely day! Hugs and love. Pandita

Harry Horsman August 15, 2018 at 3:28 AM yes true love is timeless, love your poem, Pandita Pandita Sietesantos August 15, 2018 at 1:11 PM Hi Harry, thank you so very much for your complimentary words and continued support for my work! Have a great day. Pandita

M. L. Kiser August 15, 2018 at 12:07 AM Soothingly beautiful, this poem. I enjoyed reading. Best of luck in the contest. Pandita Sietesantos August 15, 2018 at 1:10 PM Many thanks, ML, for your wonderful compliments and I am happy you enjoyed reading it! Hope you are having a great day! Pandita

Winged Warrior August 13, 2018 at 7:16 PM A perpetual pleasing poem, Pandita...nicely arranged my friend...a Fav...love & light...^WW^ Pandita Sietesantos August 14, 2018 at 9:38 AM Hi WW, thank you so much for your kind compliments and support, my friend! Have a lovely day! Hugs and love. Pandita

Pashang Salehi August 12, 2018 at 12:57 PM Very nice my dear Pandita... Pashang Salehi August 19, 2018 at 11:32 PM Pandita, your second stanza is truly magnificent... Pandita Sietesantos August 12, 2018 at 1:04 PM Thank you - thank you, dear Pashang! Hope you are enjoying a beautiful day! Hugs. Pandita

Tom Cunningham August 12, 2018 at 4:19 AM A beautiful well written verse on love Pandita. Good luck. Tom Pandita Sietesantos August 12, 2018 at 1:03 PM Tom, thank you my friend for your lovely compliments which I very much appreciate! Blessings, hugs, and love. Pandita

Michelle Faulkner August 11, 2018 at 6:48 PM Wow great line "angels weaving moonlight" so pure and radiant, best of luck in the contest! Pandita Sietesantos August 11, 2018 at 6:52 PM Awwww - thank you so much Michelle for visiting and leaving me your awesome compliments! Have a beautiful weekend! Hugs. Pandita

John Gondolf August 11, 2018 at 3:22 PM A beautiful poem of perpetual love, Pandita. Good luck in the contest, I think this will do well. John Pandita Sietesantos August 11, 2018 at 3:29 PM Hello John, thank you so very much for your kind compliments which I always appreciate! Hope you have an enjoyable weekend! Hugs. Pandita

Caren Krutsinger August 11, 2018 at 2:51 PM I feel like an angelic being penned this one, Pandita. Good luck in the contest, but you will not need it. This beautiful missive speaks for itself, you, and your muse. Pandita Sietesantos August 11, 2018 at 3:10 PM Caren, thank you kindly for you sweet, encouraging compliments! Hope you are enjoying a great weekend! Love and hugs. Pandita