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Perpetual Flame

Like an old midnight lamp you burn yourself to give luminance blazing brightly exuding within me. 4 July 2021 Syllables checked at www.howmanysyllables.com 123454321 For Ninette Poetry Contest Sponsored by Caren Krutsinger 3rd place Entered for "Say It In Nine - Old or New' Poetry Contest" Sponsored by Joseph May 2nd place

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Christuraj Alex

Date: 8/20/2022 4:58:00 AM

Great simile. Congratulations!

Joseph May

Date: 8/19/2022 11:55:00 AM

Very nicely penned JCB, Congrats on your win

Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/19/2022 9:46:00 AM

JCB, what a beautiful image of the eternal , life giving, flame of the soul like an old lamp a little out of date but with an eternal brightness! This is a beautiful and elegant image my friend. Many congratulations for your win! Blessings for your ever burning internal light.

Len Gasun

Date: 8/19/2022 7:08:00 AM

Wow! So pretty! Congratulations on your win my dear friend JCB! Thanks for sharing. Hugs

Valsa George

Date: 2/8/2022 7:56:00 PM

Congratulations Jez... ! I see that you are a winner in every contest!

Kim Merryman

Date: 7/23/2021 12:53:00 PM

JCB, congrats on your win with your well expressed ninette! Blessings, Kim M

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/22/2021 3:54:00 PM

back with congrats, JCB

Heidi Sands

Date: 7/22/2021 5:08:00 AM

Congratulations for your win JCB! Great one! :)

Sam Kauffman

Date: 7/21/2021 10:39:00 AM

Selfless love truly is a perpetual flame, JCB! You have expressed the power of the essence of love so beautifully! So happy to see this on the winners list! Congratulations! Blessings dear friend.