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Luna's visage scarred, pocked, and blemished by time, rises majestically into the astral plane to traverse the ebony emptiness of the night. And like a sentry posted high above the planet, She monitors the comings and goings of humanity, an unenviable enterprise. For Man is a pernicious invader that pollutes the pristineness of space with thousands of bits of irretrievable junk. And yet, it seems nothing can dampen Man's enthusiasm for the conquest of space, no matter the space debris left orbiting the Earth in His wake. (Free Verse) 10-23-2020 Dampen, Visage, Enterprise, Pernicious, Astral, Sentry, Traverse, Blemish Eight word challenge 11 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: John Hamilton

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Date: 11/13/2020 6:41:00 PM
wow, so many great poems from these eight words. Wish I had time to visit all the winners. Big congrats, emile. You did this perfectly.
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Date: 11/14/2020 7:02:00 AM
Thanks Andrea, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/13/2020 5:46:00 PM
Another great write Emile, congrats on another win!
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Date: 11/14/2020 7:01:00 AM
Thanks John, I appreciate the win and your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 10/23/2020 7:49:00 AM
Beautifully penned by a magnificent poetic maestro.
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Date: 10/23/2020 9:03:00 AM
Thanks Caren, you honor me my friend and I appreciate it, Emile.
Date: 10/23/2020 7:42:00 AM
Such a creative poem. Love it and wish you a win :) God bless you
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Date: 10/23/2020 9:02:00 AM
Thanks Regina, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

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