Permanently Attached Leaves

The countryside is ablaze with colour But leaves fall when the winds get gustier Causing much work We pay for this quirk With permanently attached leaves I'd be much happier © Jack Ellison 2015
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Breidenthal Avatar
November 20, 2015 at 3:50 PM
A most lovely limerick! always, Laura
Ellison Avatar
November 21, 2015 at 6:53 AM
The fabulous colour display has a downside!!! LOL Love, Jack xoxox
Smith Avatar
October 21, 2015 at 3:28 PM
The leaves are changing and so are we....many shapes, sizes, they be...pretty they are....way up.far....hold that thought I got to.pee
Ellison Avatar
October 22, 2015 at 7:50 AM
Hope you made it!!!!
Eastman Avatar
October 21, 2015 at 1:50 PM
Oh No! Permantent leaves you should not want on trees... For I have 2 trees like this don't you see... They only drop leaves in storms so free... So I end up raking leaves year around I decree... I'd rather do it once a year! Honestly!...
Eastman Avatar
October 21, 2015 at 2:04 PM
PS. Dragon and Grandpa Troll understand completely... After all what would Santa Jack, who lives at the permanently frozen North Pole, do with leaves?... Can 't afford a leaf blower. The bills are just beginning to come in for the surgery... Already have over $2600 in bills received and they've only started to come in... Expect $5000. Thank you Obama Care... Besides I can't stand the noise leaf blowers make... Too loud. My rake is nicer.
Ellison Avatar
October 21, 2015 at 1:52 PM
Try an electric leaf sucker! Works great! xxx
Tor Avatar
October 21, 2015 at 9:14 AM
Wouldn't that be nice Jack no more raking!!! Yipeeeeee! Hope you are doing well. This morning.
Ellison Avatar
October 21, 2015 at 9:24 AM
Just bought us an electric leave sucker!!! AMAZING! GOOD MORNING MICHAE!!!
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