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Warm water
Swallow me whole 
Up to my neck 
Slide over my lips
And puddle into my ears 
Close my eyes
The water climbs up to my brow
Pull the plug
The heat recedes 
Watch the bubbles sucked down 
The drain hole 
The water streams 
My body steams
I'm still not clean
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Lamoureux Avatar
January 8, 2018 at 1:30 PM
Impactful and great relatable imagery.
Brown Avatar
December 31, 2017 at 11:38 AM
Wow--I like it.
Stars Avatar
December 23, 2017 at 11:18 AM
man we freaking love your style ...
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