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Perky Paramour Pleasantries

Patricia parades pretty periwinkle paisley pyjamas playfully presenting plump pinwheel pastries AP: 3rd place 2023 Submitted on October 21, 2019 for TAUTOGRAM POEMS sponsored by EVE ROPER – RANKED 3RD

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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/31/2019 4:46:00 AM
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- Congratulations on your winning poem, Line :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/30/2019 9:56:00 PM
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How can anyone get to sleep with Patricia wearing those pajamas?... Seriously, congrats on your win in the contest. And Line, your poem has triggered and inspired a little monoku titled, 'No, you don't snore, which I'm going to post in the next few minutes. THANK YOU so much! Warmest wishes, Gershon
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/31/2019 12:43:00 AM
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What a lovely compliment, Gershon. LOL
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Eve Roper
Date: 10/30/2019 8:54:00 PM
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Thank you so very much in taking the challenge of creating an Alliteration poem for this contest, Line, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 10/25/2019 11:06:00 PM
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I love periwinkle (both the color and the word!) This should do well in the contest, Line-
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/25/2019 11:09:00 PM
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Thanks, Michelle, for your much appreciated visit and comment.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/23/2019 4:56:00 PM
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You must have had a grin a mile wide on your face penning this one... Oops, that's me looking the mirror. :) :) :) gw
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/23/2019 7:07:00 PM
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LOL you probably misread - it's pastries not pasties, Gershon.
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Jack Horne
Date: 10/23/2019 7:29:00 AM
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very clever
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/23/2019 7:39:00 AM
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Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Jack.
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Elaine Perrin
Date: 10/23/2019 5:12:00 AM
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I like it ;-) x
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/23/2019 7:39:00 AM
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Thanks, Elaine.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/22/2019 10:27:00 AM
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Hilarious! Love it!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/23/2019 7:39:00 AM
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Thanks, Kim. Much appreciated.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/22/2019 8:34:00 AM
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My kind of pasties..oops I meant pastries!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/22/2019 10:27:00 AM
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LOL, Richard! And tasties tis not far from that either is it? LOL
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/22/2019 9:47:00 AM
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LOL what a difference one little "r" will make.
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 10/21/2019 11:13:00 PM
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That's a mouthful. Fun to read.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/22/2019 12:44:00 AM
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LOL thanks for your visit and comment, Juliet.

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