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Perky Paramour Pleasantries

Patricia parades pretty periwinkle paisley pyjamas playfully presenting plump pinwheel pastries



AP: 3rd place 2023

Submitted on October 21, 2019 for TAUTOGRAM POEMS sponsored by EVE ROPER  – RANKED 3RD

Copyright © Line Gauthier | Year Posted 2019

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Anne-Lise Andresen

October 31, 2019 at 4:46 AM

- Congratulations on your winning poem, Line :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

October 30, 2019 at 9:56 PM

How can anyone get to sleep with Patricia wearing those pajamas?... Seriously, congrats on your win in the contest. And Line, your poem has triggered and inspired a little monoku titled, 'No, you don't snore, which I'm going to post in the next few minutes. THANK YOU so much! Warmest wishes, Gershon

October 31, 2019 at 12:43 AM

What a lovely compliment, Gershon. LOL

October 30, 2019 at 8:54 PM

Thank you so very much in taking the challenge of creating an Alliteration poem for this contest, Line, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Michelle Faulkner

October 25, 2019 at 11:06 PM

I love periwinkle (both the color and the word!) This should do well in the contest, Line-

October 25, 2019 at 11:09 PM

Thanks, Michelle, for your much appreciated visit and comment.

October 23, 2019 at 4:56 PM

You must have had a grin a mile wide on your face penning this one... Oops, that's me looking the mirror. :) :) :) gw

October 23, 2019 at 7:07 PM

LOL you probably misread - it's pastries not pasties, Gershon.

October 23, 2019 at 7:29 AM

very clever

October 23, 2019 at 7:39 AM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Jack.

October 23, 2019 at 5:12 AM

I like it ;-) x

October 23, 2019 at 7:39 AM

Thanks, Elaine.

October 22, 2019 at 10:27 AM

Hilarious! Love it!

October 23, 2019 at 7:39 AM

Thanks, Kim. Much appreciated.

Richard Lamoureux

October 22, 2019 at 8:34 AM

My kind of pasties..oops I meant pastries!

October 22, 2019 at 10:27 AM

LOL, Richard! And tasties tis not far from that either is it? LOL

October 22, 2019 at 9:47 AM

LOL what a difference one little "r" will make.

October 21, 2019 at 11:13 PM

That's a mouthful. Fun to read.

October 22, 2019 at 12:44 AM

LOL thanks for your visit and comment, Juliet.

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