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Peripheral Thoughts ....

....passing perpendicular enable this feeble brain to regain momentum in its frenetic pursuit of something hugely prophetic to enlighten you readers with a rhythmic avalanche of profound Love. Then again, thoughts that are hovering can in fact be an outright impediment unintentionally causing a stammer, guffaw, or some other sophistic hilarity to erupt taking all seriously serious spirituality off into the mundane.

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Date: 3/20/2009 11:23:00 AM
"hovering thoughts" whew!! twist my brain!! love it! Jim
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Date: 3/18/2009 8:29:00 AM
Thank you, Sue, for encouragements and read, a poet sometimes is an atlas longing for help to put down what he must never put down. Thanks for the read. Anyone who understand the hovering thought knows. Great work, keep it up.
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Date: 3/16/2009 11:29:00 AM
Sue - I read this without realizing it is an Acrostic. Wow! Truly exceptional! Love the title too. Just thinking, huh. Awesome write! Love, shar
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Date: 3/16/2009 10:30:00 AM
I am new to poetry soup and you make me feel so important, thank you. I feel kindness in your words and love in your poem, mystic, serious, playful, profound. God bless you
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Date: 3/16/2009 10:16:00 AM
brilliant writing, Sue... this acroctic is lovely ~ Arany
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Date: 3/16/2009 3:43:00 AM
ahh- excellent commentary on the befuddlement of communication.... well, we try any way.. thanks for the comment on 'Vision Song in Echoes Garden'..it was one of my first poems, and will always be one of my favorites...it began as a dream, then became sort of, a love poem for someone..anyway..good memories, good poetry I guess. thanks again..i look forward to reading more of yours..i like the opening line in this one..it leads one to the sort of..bump in the road, at the end......very clever.
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Date: 3/15/2009 6:53:00 PM
Wow, this is wonderful. I don't think I could ever write an acrostic with so much detail and so many letters. I love the last line a lot. It really ties it all together so nicely. Smiles from Lolita
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