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I am a period. When you see me it means a full stop. A break for the reader. The end of the sentence. I end your story. Sometimes not soon enough. Sometimes I am not found for long stretches of time. I am hiding it seems. Good sentence structure brings me acceptable in the world. I like that. When I am used correctly. Oops. Not in intervals durations infrequently or repeatedly and wherever and whenever. Often I go where I do not belong just because I can. I am not pretty like a exclamation mark or a semi-colon or even the lovely question mark no I am just a dot. But I am demanding. ClOSE the door. or I can be polite. Please close the door. So this is my story. I am a period. When you see me it means a full stop. A break for the reader. The end of a sentence. And in ending always remember to wrap it up with me. The end. ______________________________ September 8, 2015 Free Verse - Personification For the contest, Punctuation Personified, sponsor, Debbie Guzzi 9th Place

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Date: 10/11/2015 2:04:00 PM
The Periods have it..Way to go with this winner..Congrats..Sara..Especially cute one..
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Date: 10/9/2015 12:16:00 AM
Broken, Congratulations with your win. **SKAT**
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Date: 10/7/2015 7:53:00 PM
That's one feisty period!!! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 9/9/2015 10:07:00 PM
Very clever.. I enjoyed the format and the unique subject matter. Glad I made a "full stop" to read this ;) ~~X~~
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Date: 9/9/2015 5:09:00 PM
cool comparison period.
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Date: 9/9/2015 1:20:00 PM
This is lovely!! Just amazing!!!! Good luck in the contest!! :D :D
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Date: 9/9/2015 10:50:00 AM
I enjoyed this very much, BW.
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Date: 9/9/2015 7:30:00 AM
I love the life you've breathed into the period Broken Wings. All the best in the contest.
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Date: 9/9/2015 3:13:00 AM
- A powerful, poems B.W. ..... I see luckily that it "only" for the contest :) - Good luck it is a great poem ! - Hope your day will be beautiful :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/9/2015 1:59:00 AM
Broken Wings you have done it again. This is a winner! Cleverly thought, punctuated and ended with....... a period. I'm sure this write of yours will do exceptionally well. Congrats..
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Date: 9/8/2015 10:26:00 PM
that is a big period. I'll check back later
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