Perimeters

sketch of graphic rage...
creative mind in a cage
ink runs on the page
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Radke Avatar
January 11, 2011 at 12:59 PM
Excellent!! This is exactly what it feels like sometimes, to have the words trapped, then suddenly break free and run out upon the page. 'Graphic rage...' Wonderful line. This is most excellent. Best wishes, Deb
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January 6, 2011 at 5:14 PM
like this one:) very vivid imagery. Thanks for your comment on 3:00pm departure. Yep, looked at my watch and there they were in v formation heading eastward at precisely 3:00pm :)) who knew?
Pettit Avatar
January 6, 2011 at 8:54 AM
You went one step further by writing a senryu that rhymes. This is an impressive offering!
La France Avatar
January 6, 2011 at 8:17 AM
"ink runs on the page" such a vivid Senryu, well done~~
Cheeseman Avatar
January 6, 2011 at 7:26 AM
Fine piece Robb
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