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Perimeters

sketch of graphic rage... creative mind in a cage ink runs on the page

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Deb Radke

Date: 1/11/2011 12:59:00 PM

Excellent!! This is exactly what it feels like sometimes, to have the words trapped, then suddenly break free and run out upon the page. 'Graphic rage...' Wonderful line. This is most excellent. Best wishes, Deb

Carol Fillmore

Date: 1/6/2011 5:14:00 PM

like this one:) very vivid imagery. Thanks for your comment on 3:00pm departure. Yep, looked at my watch and there they were in v formation heading eastward at precisely 3:00pm :)) who knew?

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/6/2011 8:54:00 AM

You went one step further by writing a senryu that rhymes. This is an impressive offering!

Constance La France

Date: 1/6/2011 8:17:00 AM

"ink runs on the page" such a vivid Senryu, well done~~

Daniel Cheeseman

Date: 1/6/2011 7:26:00 AM

Fine piece Robb