Perilous

Your touch is an electric shock good thing I am not in a bucket full of water Your kiss is a roaring flame my mouth is filled with flammable liquid Your love is a shaky ladder I climb to the top and invite gravity’s inevitable seduction ©roysodavid12-11ARR

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Skat A

Date: 8/17/2013 10:57:00 PM

ROY, CONGRATULATIONS on having your poem featured this week........ Love ~SKAT~

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/17/2013 10:04:00 PM

Hello Roy, . Congratulations!!! It's nice to see your poem Featured on the soups Home Page, this past week :-) goodnight~ Luv* LINDA *

Skat A

Date: 7/30/2013 12:32:00 PM

Hi Roy, wow.. love is awesome, well I don't know about the ladder climb,, the fall seems endless.... ,, your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, I love it!! Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless..... Hugs* SKAT

Shanity Rain

Date: 7/30/2013 11:27:00 AM

very good !

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/30/2013 9:49:00 AM

- Hello new member: Roy. - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thank you for choosing to share your poems here with us. - I look forward to reading more in the future. - Have a good time and I wish you luck. - (Give and receive comments) - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/29/2013 9:41:00 PM

about your poem: wow.. with the passion... and ha, i love the line, "good thing I am not in a bucket full of water" the line had me smiling.. xox Linda

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/29/2013 9:38:00 PM

Hello Roy -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Roy Batts
Date: 7/30/2013 5:13:00 AM

Thank you, I will check it out.