Notes About The Poem

THIS POEM IS AN 'EXERCISE' WRITE I COMPOSED IN 11TH GRADE.

Perhaps Seems As Maybe Appears

perhaps I did splash
            a wet dash too much
                            when I was growing up  ~

                            seems I was selfish
            one fish too many
when merely a pup  ~

maybe I acted disrespectful
            an action too long
                            when just a forming hiccup  ~       
                                                                                         
                            appears I misled my part
            a missed start too often,
yepper, yea, yes, oh, yup  ~

                                          waz sup?
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Crandall Avatar
October 27, 2025 at 2:51 PM
This is a fun poem with a great title, yup!
Wolf Avatar
October 26, 2025 at 8:43 PM
Too bad there is not a contest extant that fits this serendipitious romp, CayCay. Pure enjoyment. Thanks, gw
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 26, 2025 at 5:51 PM
humorous and touching poem. A delight to read
Hind Avatar
October 25, 2025 at 5:05 PM
It almost seems like someone is learning a lesson? Maybe not right, but...this was adorable, CayCay
Allison Avatar
October 25, 2025 at 8:25 AM
ha ha ha this is fun Caycay!:-) hugs jan xx
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