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Perhaps I Was In Heaven

The trees were as cathedrals, Twas a temple of a kind— A place one seeks redemption, And others peace-of-mind. And I was surely born again Within that sacred wood— Where sentinels, by God’s own Hand For centuries have stood. And ever since I wonder, Was the forest but a dream? The feather-ferns and flora; The diamond-studded stream? But reverie, or reality, Does it matter anyway? Knowing I’m a better man Since that extraordinary day. Perhaps I was in Heaven, Could a forest somehow be? I don’t suppose it matters, though, It was heavenly to me!

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Charmaine Chircop

Date: 7/12/2019 4:08:00 PM

Heavenly it must have been.

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 7/13/2019 8:09:00 AM

You should visit those woods more oftenly :). No books yet..Just a poem here and there ,a lyric song and some haiku in journals.I still have a lot to learn before thinking of publishing a book.Did you publish any books?I believe you did from the way you write and you're so up to date with the poetry forms.

Kenneth R. Merrill
Date: 7/12/2019 5:18:00 PM

The Redwoods, such an extraordinary and humbling place. I’ve started on my free verse about a winters night in the woods. Lately, though, it’s one distraction after the next—but I’ll get there, inspired by your wonderfully descriptive verse. And, sincerely, I appreciate your taking the time to read some of my writes, and to further comment—the feedback being a welcome encouragement. Thank you, Charmaine. I appreciate your kindness and skill. Have you managed a book yet?

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/6/2019 5:32:00 AM

I adore the woods; I have lived in them twice. This is my second house in the woods. "Where sentinels, by God’s own Hand For centuries have stood." - exactly! I have to think you were in the woods when you wrote this.

Kenneth R. Merrill
Date: 7/6/2019 1:16:00 PM

Close. I had to call upon the Muse to help me recollect my day amongst the Redwoods—a humbling experience, indeed.