Perhaps I Lacked Gold and Diamond

Perhaps apples were fewer in the bowl
Perhaps you needed still further tints
Whatever I emptied my whole almirah
Nothing was left in the blood and flesh

It was a dream we started from
Doesn't dream lead us to reality
Then what for our desire for the froths of sleep
Dream trees steeped in red round grapes

A new gondola in a new creek
Desires for the sea only pursuit
Breaking the waves with tremendous joy
New and newer islands of fulfillment


Perhaps I lacked gold and diamond
Or else why would you suddenly shift
To new shores of pink communication
To new shafts of unknown sunlight


Our thoughts are perhaps always partial
The kernel and further we cannot see
Initially both accommodated the anchor
Our ocean would conquer all mountains


Now we do feel the beginning was flawed
Your nucleus needed something beyond  love
Was it a regression to the unappeased childhood
Was it some other fuel than just love

Okay my dear stay satisfied
With the new full moon and new autumn sun
Just keep careful of another darkness
That doesn't call for yet different rays




September 9, 2019
Sometimes love is not enough Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Silent One

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 9/17/2019 3:02:00 PM
Probir congratulations on your win
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Date: 9/17/2019 11:21:00 PM
Thank you, Constance ...
Date: 9/14/2019 11:41:00 PM
Congratulations and all my best...many blessings - Great writing
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Date: 9/15/2019 8:07:00 AM
Glad that you like it ... Thank you ...
Date: 9/14/2019 2:44:00 PM
- Congratulations on this great writing ... well done, Probir :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/15/2019 8:06:00 AM
Thank you, Sunshine ...
Date: 9/14/2019 11:59:00 AM
Deep and emotive poetry, some people are never happy.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 9/14/2019 12:17:00 PM
I am honoured ... Thank you, Silent ...
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