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Rob's 'Perhaps, a Poem' Contest  ~  9/16/25

Perhaps, a Poem

I first read Lord Byron's poetry after our love was lost.
The poet wrote of his grieving in 'When We Two Parted.' 
Both of us went our separate ways, sorrow, the high cost.
When love withered and died, I was left broken hearted.

Byron penned how his time of "silence and tears," endured.
I grieve without your hand's gentle touch upon my cheek,
without the kiss of your soft lips, ones that I had allured,
Byron's verses were the sort of words I could not speak.

I couldn't tell you of the tears I cried, each one falling away,
or how often I whispered your name in a nightly dream.
I lived with romantic despair that Sonnets woefully convey,
but on waking, I found my reveries were not what they seem.

I quote a lesser of Byron's lines, for it's now my favorite one.
He wrote, "Those beloved, vanish'd hours my soul was given thee."
'Remind Me Not, Remind Me Not' made me feel dolefully undone.
Bereft but "may never be forgot," although our love ceased to be.

I fear that I shall eternally be reminded of the love we shared.
No dream can restore it when it's faded like stars in sunlight,
or withered flower petals. Pity my heart has not been spared.
Perhaps, a poem I should write to fill the loneliness of each night.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025


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Date: 9/17/2025 7:48:00 AM
Dear Lin, what a beautiful tribute to a lost love and the way you used Lord Byron's work as a mirror for your own feelings is so creative and heartfelt. Such a sense of romantic despair and the lingering pain of memory are incredibly well-captured. You are so gifted as a poet, and yes, the struggle to find a way to express that grief is challenging. A wonderful piece. Blessings, Dear Lin, Daniel
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Date: 9/16/2025 4:01:00 PM
Lin, great work on several levels. The way you honor Byron and discuss what he said in your own way fit the contest. That you could not speak in the same way makes this a very unusual delivery of pain. Yours seems much more intense than his and the way you end with the title leaves me in awe of your feeling and means to express it. Thanks for sharing this one! Smiles!!!
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Date: 9/16/2025 10:27:00 AM
nICE POEM.
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