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Perhaps their hearts will forgive me the many loves I squandered now an old dreamer's reflection that floats upon the ripples that cross my mind from the last stone of memory I tossed into the dark depth of yesterdays where the lost first birth of love's beauty was kept hidden in the pealing trunk of carelessness it's filled with old pictures of lovers that posed for a brief moment in time when romantic interludes were mistaken for love my hands gray and trembling turn each picture silently remembering a world of sadness and countless sunsets that fell between the thin red of empty dawns and days and nights where nothing really lived the heart, once a vibrant cauldron of burning flames of purple passions consumed all thought and reason and left a crying melody which keeps playing in the hollow darkness of once upon a time where tears formed waves that crashed the heart's barren shores below the darkest sky of their tomorrow Perhaps, they have forgiven me 8/17/19

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Date: 12/14/2019 4:24:00 PM
This outstanding piece with its beautiful metaphors resonates with my own beating heart of past regrets of loves that were not to be. I can so identify with your last stanza that is so brilliantly written. Congratulations on your win. This is a Fave for me Frederic! Awe inspiring! Mele Kalikimaka! xxoo
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Date: 12/13/2019 5:12:00 AM
Best wishes and congrats for your win in John's Free Verse contest, Frederic - he knows his stuff! Blessings and happy holidays to you and yours! :o)
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Date: 12/11/2019 7:26:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem Frederic
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Date: 12/11/2019 10:42:00 AM
This is a very touching poem Frederic, loved every word, congrats on another fine win!
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Date: 8/19/2019 3:10:00 PM
wow, deep feeling and wonderful imagery together, Frederic! this is so poignant.
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Date: 8/18/2019 12:33:00 PM
I feel your poetry and I've been in the same place...wondering if the hearts will forgive me... Deep and personal poetry.
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Date: 8/18/2019 9:45:00 AM
Beautifully written and expressed Frederic :)
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Date: 8/17/2019 3:15:00 PM
we charge breakthrough and foibles to experience, frederic... all is right; deep, splendid poem.. huggs
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