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Perfunctory At Best

No romance, just mating Perfunctory at best, No love, just procreating, No need to line the nest. No artistic self expression Just a path from a to b, A monosyllabic procession, Mental catastrophe. Constricted imagination Creativity windblown, A fallow field's stagnation No seeds of beauty sown. In single files our minds March to a humdrum beat, Originality left behind Our dreams around our feet. Entry for If there was no poetry Poetry Contest Sponsored by Silent One 21/1/2020.Placed =2nd.

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Date: 1/26/2020 4:04:00 PM
VERY well written poem on that theme, Gary. Don't know where you placed on the list but it ought to have been high!! Congrats.
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Gary Smith
Date: 1/26/2020 4:12:00 PM
Thank you Andrea. :)
Date: 1/26/2020 2:36:00 PM
Well stated! Congrats on your win.
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Gary Smith
Date: 1/26/2020 4:12:00 PM
Thank you Gail. :)
Date: 1/26/2020 8:31:00 AM
- Congratulations on your great winning poem in S.O. contest, Gary :) - Have a lovely Sunday :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Gary Smith
Date: 1/26/2020 8:41:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise. :)
Date: 1/26/2020 5:23:00 AM
First line is so true... poetry is great for romance! Congrats on your placement in the contest..
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Gary Smith
Date: 1/26/2020 5:25:00 AM
Thank you Silent One. :)
Date: 1/24/2020 8:18:00 AM
Wow! Now this is a top contender! Well said!
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Gary Smith
Date: 1/24/2020 8:24:00 AM
Thank you Kim. :)
Date: 1/24/2020 6:11:00 AM
"March to a humdrum beat, Originality left behind" - this is so true!
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Gary Smith
Date: 1/24/2020 6:13:00 AM
Thank you Caren. :)
Date: 1/21/2020 4:56:00 PM
I believe you’re right. Hi Gary, best wishes...
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Gary Smith
Date: 1/21/2020 4:57:00 PM
Thank you Charlie. :)

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