Perfumed Romantic Bower

Best Romantic Poem 12/13/24
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Perfumed Romantic Bower

Twilight calls me with a soft amber light,
Into delicate scents of memory,
To a fragile bower of fragrant nights
Your saffron smile, a perfumed mystery.

Through gossamer hues of incense demur,
Fantasies flutter like silken moonbeams,
When we sip the honeyed nectar of myrrh,
And savor sweet spices in whispered dreams.

Scents of tuberose merge with star jasmine,
Draw us into this garden’s scented glen
Where the pulsing of bluebellvines entreat
Enchantment from your flute song sung again.

Love’s dulcet scent of ambrosia transcends
Our perfumed garden, harmony ascends.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Dietrich Avatar
February 1, 2025 at 8:54 AM
Another excellent love sonnet that didn't make the list. It's beautiful, Sam. Wish the contest had been a standard one.
Legros Kelley Avatar
December 30, 2024 at 8:13 PM
Very lovely Sam, you are an amazing poet.
Sands Avatar
December 22, 2024 at 2:23 PM
Wow , beautiful . Sweet and peaceful to read. Very nice :)
Rodgers Avatar
December 17, 2024 at 4:51 AM
Dear Sam, How could I not love this sensory experience reading your wonderful words. "Love's dulcet scent of ambrosia transcends." So harmonious and enchanting. It is funny that I am currently writing a Christmas poem that includes many scents of herbs. We must be on the same wave length. Merry Christmas, My Friend, Daniel
Proxenos Avatar
December 16, 2024 at 5:47 AM
What a wonderful scented shady garden with a multitude of delicate beautiful plants each one teasing your memory with an intense floral scent, harmony ascending. Breathtaking perfumed write - love it Sam. Wishing you joy and health over the Christmas season. God bless you and your lovely family. Hugs Jennifer.
Kauffman Avatar
December 16, 2024 at 10:35 AM
Dear Jennifer! Thank you for your beautiful feedback - your blessings! I am so grateful for your ever thoughtful messages. They warm my heart and inspire me! Had fun with this theme and I think the sonnet is the perfect form for a romantic poem. I can imagine you sitting around the pool getting ready for your Christmas celebrations! Sending you blessings of Advent joy and hope, dear friend!
Hind Avatar
December 14, 2024 at 4:27 PM
Very "sweet" - I can almost smell it <3 beautiful images and flow
Kauffman Avatar
December 16, 2024 at 10:29 AM
Thank you so much, Paige! The scent of these beautiful flowers sets the stage for a romantic scene! Sending you blessing of peace and joy!
Cunningham Avatar
December 13, 2024 at 10:27 PM
Beautiful romantic imagery Sam, best of luck in the contest, I hope you have a wonderful Christmas and a happy new year. Over Fork Over. Tom
Kauffman Avatar
December 16, 2024 at 10:27 AM
Hi Tom, your feedback is so uplifting! Thank you for that gift. Sending you all the best for a Happy Christmas to you and your family! Over Fork Over!
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