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PERFUME* ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ the spring breeze carries the perfume of p o e m s
*Note: I published this poem in June 2025 (poetrysoup.com › poem › perfume_1738935) then deleted it. This is my original poem

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




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Date: 8/8/2025 4:09:00 AM
An adorable poem! Like an inviting breeze bringing every sound to the perceptions, it is both effortless and expressive. Stunningly lightweight and fragile.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/8/2025 5:03:00 PM
thank you, Sotto! Your appreciation for this 'breezy' poem is welcomed and encouraging. Thank you & have a pleasant weekend, hugs from Texas, Sara
Date: 8/7/2025 6:49:00 PM
So simple, yet so evocative—like the breeze itself gently carrying each letter to the senses. Beautifully airy and delicate.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/8/2025 5:02:00 PM
thank you, Rowena, for visiting and for your delicate comments. I appreciate your visits and comments...always a welcome sight, hugs, Sara
Date: 8/7/2025 2:26:00 PM
Nice one, Sara!
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/7/2025 5:12:00 PM
thank you, sweet Kim!

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