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Performance of the Seas

remember the coating of brutish brandy
you slugged back without a whisper
the whites of your eyes like glaciers
and i smiled and let the warmness
sit on my tongue then slowly roll
down my beating throat, with
a rush of laughter and you so red

remember how she belted out
her performance, joining hands
with the dessert of joyful voices
the ship became her opera house
she presented her gift to us
as her husband horrified
by lack of payment to his pocket

remember, dear, the rocking
as we’re swept by the dashing cold
topside, my swimwear wrap whipping
barely kept by my grip. my hands
busy but my insides joyous
as we capture every morsel bit
on high seas adventure

later your lips, heartily pressed
in my memory book, freely
sliding over mine as if you’ve
never worked a day in your life

9/4/2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 9/6/2018 2:53:00 PM
Very interesting Kim and your excellent write has so clearly brought your adventure to life for me Well Done !!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/6/2018 7:59:00 PM
Thank you, Mike!
Date: 9/5/2018 3:53:00 PM
Great to look back on happy memories. I see you like cruising, have done a couple, really enjoyed, sailed from Miami a couple of years ago, I've never seen so many cruise ships in the one place. Good luck. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/5/2018 5:36:00 PM
Thanks, Tom! A lot of fun!
Date: 9/5/2018 1:25:00 PM
Sounds like quite a performance - good luck in the contest!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/5/2018 1:30:00 PM
Thank you, Michelle!
Date: 9/5/2018 10:59:00 AM
Well written, Kim. A trip to remember for sure. Good luck in the contest...Charlie
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/5/2018 11:05:00 AM
Thank you, Charlie! :)

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