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Performance of the Seas

remember the coating of brutish brandy you slugged back without a whisper the whites of your eyes like glaciers and i smiled and let the warmness sit on my tongue then slowly roll down my beating throat, with a rush of laughter and you so red remember how she belted out her performance, joining hands with the dessert of joyful voices the ship became her opera house she presented her gift to us as her husband horrified by lack of payment to his pocket remember, dear, the rocking as we’re swept by the dashing cold topside, my swimwear wrap whipping barely kept by my grip. my hands busy but my insides joyous as we capture every morsel bit on high seas adventure later your lips, heartily pressed in my memory book, freely sliding over mine as if you’ve never worked a day in your life 9/4/2018

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Date: 9/6/2018 2:53:00 PM
Very interesting Kim and your excellent write has so clearly brought your adventure to life for me Well Done !!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/6/2018 7:59:00 PM
Thank you, Mike!
Date: 9/5/2018 3:53:00 PM
Great to look back on happy memories. I see you like cruising, have done a couple, really enjoyed, sailed from Miami a couple of years ago, I've never seen so many cruise ships in the one place. Good luck. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/5/2018 5:36:00 PM
Thanks, Tom! A lot of fun!
Date: 9/5/2018 1:25:00 PM
Sounds like quite a performance - good luck in the contest!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/5/2018 1:30:00 PM
Thank you, Michelle!
Date: 9/5/2018 10:59:00 AM
Well written, Kim. A trip to remember for sure. Good luck in the contest...Charlie
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/5/2018 11:05:00 AM
Thank you, Charlie! :)

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