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Perfectly Terrible

It's a beautiful day for a hurricane,
And perfectly I feel terrible
But my Mind is twice my Bane-
My Emotions are unbearable!

I admit I've made mistakes,
Some were small but most were great
Revenge I covet- I dearly Love it:
But it's the worst of thirsts to slake!

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Robin Davis

February 21, 2014 at 8:36 AM

Chan The Man This are some deep and powerful words that a lot of people can relate to. Making mistakes, feeling pain and sorrow, and not liking our selves for what we've done. Nice job my friend. UH OH My Willpower has a boo boo. I better go make it all better. LOL Thanks for the nice comment.. Hugs and Love Sweet Pea

Just That Archaic Poet

February 21, 2014 at 10:53 AM

Thanks, Sweet Pea :)

Karl Marszalowicz

February 2, 2014 at 4:59 AM

your last line is very good I encourage you to write more like that!

Just That Archaic Poet

February 2, 2014 at 5:24 AM

Thanks, Karl :)

Kelly Deschler

December 22, 2013 at 7:49 PM

I can relate, because I have felt like this before...I really like the contrasts in every line of this poem, including the title. A very clever write, BP! I enjoyed it immensely!

Just That Archaic Poet

December 23, 2013 at 9:24 AM

Thanks, SP; sincerely appreciated, as always :)

Richard Lamoureux

December 20, 2013 at 7:09 PM

very entertaining Chan.

Just That Archaic Poet

December 21, 2013 at 7:56 AM

Thanks, Richard :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

December 17, 2013 at 8:31 PM

A pure heart, JTAP

Just That Archaic Poet

December 18, 2013 at 11:57 AM

Thanks, Doc :)

Poet Destroyer A

December 17, 2013 at 7:55 PM

The ending is right Chan, ... However, I love the first and second line. How you mixed a double emotion in both lines.... I am sending soup mail. Again... PD

Just That Archaic Poet

December 19, 2013 at 10:05 AM

Thanks so much, Linda; I sincerely appreciate it :)

Robin Davis

December 17, 2013 at 4:38 PM

Chan The Man I can feel you pouring out your heart so the reader can see what's inside your soul. The emotion you are expressing is done in a creative way. Nice job my friend Hugs

Just That Archaic Poet

December 18, 2013 at 11:59 AM

Thanks, Sweet Pea <3 <3 <3