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Perfection Restored

With tiny pebbles ripples make Reflections shattered, gently break Waves diffuse like a soothing balm Bringing tranquillity and calm Restoring the mirror like surface of the lake Jan Allison 2nd September 2014 Mirrors: Contest Sponsor: Nette Onclaud ~awarded 6th place~

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Hija De La Luna

Date: 9/15/2014 5:47:00 PM

i love the imagery, Jan! Congrats!

Jan Allison
Date: 9/15/2014 5:54:00 PM

thanks so much for the lovely comment :-) hugs Jan xx

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/15/2014 1:31:00 AM

love the tonality and transformative effect of your message, jan.. ever lovely.. thank you for joining my contest with big congrats and hugggs!

Jan Allison
Date: 9/15/2014 5:53:00 PM

I really enjoyed the challenge Nette - your contests inspire me to try extra hard:-) hugs jan xxx

Paul Callus

Date: 9/14/2014 4:15:00 AM

Back again with congratulations, Jan; my initial comments on this write still apply:) paul

Jan Allison
Date: 9/14/2014 4:36:00 AM

Thanks Paul I really appreciate your comment:-) Hugs Jan xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/14/2014 1:00:00 AM

Wow it's so beautifully done Jan! Congrats on big win!

Jan Allison
Date: 9/14/2014 4:36:00 AM

Many thanks Dr Sharma:-) Hugs Jan xx

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/13/2014 10:41:00 PM

Congrats on the win, Jan

Jan Allison
Date: 9/14/2014 4:35:00 AM

Many thanks Dr Mehta:-) Hugs Jan xx

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 9/13/2014 7:40:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Jan. You brought this out so beautifully. I love it.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/13/2014 7:43:00 PM

Thanks Brenda and congrats again on your podium win:-) Hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 9/13/2014 7:04:00 PM

Congrats Jan...hugs Tim

Jan Allison
Date: 9/13/2014 7:09:00 PM

Many thanks Tim am delighted to be placed in nette's contest:-) Hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 9/6/2014 5:41:00 AM

This is beautiful, Jan; I much prefer it to mine! Yours is a lovely picture in itself....a portrayal of serenity. gl in contest. hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 9/6/2014 6:36:00 AM

Thank you so much for that delightful comment Paul:-) hugs Jan xxx

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 9/2/2014 10:20:00 PM

This is one of my favorites of your writes. It's perfect. You couldn't add or take away a word. I love it hopefully another win for you.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/3/2014 12:53:00 AM

You are too kind with your praise Maurice I write and hope poeple like it:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Tim Smith

Date: 9/2/2014 3:37:00 PM

I love to skip stones into the water Jan...very soothing.... Hugs Tim

Jan Allison
Date: 9/2/2014 3:50:00 PM

Thanks as ever for the lovely comment Tim:-) Hugs Jan xxxx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/2/2014 3:12:00 PM

very nicely done, jan. I bet this one will fill up fast. I made my poem in under five min. but am afraid to post it yet. It's so goofy but so truthful!!

Jan Allison
Date: 9/2/2014 3:15:00 PM

LOL Andrea I wish this had taken me 5 mins:-) Hugs Jan xxx

John Lawless

Date: 9/2/2014 2:44:00 PM

A soothingly gentle approach to the theme. Reads as easily as the ripples fading.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/2/2014 2:49:00 PM

Thank you so much for the lovely comment John:-) Hugs Jan xx

Gary Bateman

Date: 9/2/2014 2:01:00 PM

Jan, I like this piece immensely. It looks like a "7" here from me. Best of Luck in the contest. All the Best . . . Gary

Jan Allison
Date: 9/2/2014 2:03:00 PM

Thank you so much for that lovely comment Gary I really do appreciate your support:-) Hugs Jan xx