Perfection

Sometimes we write many drafts
about who we want to be in our thoughts,
only to realize we've become editors
in other's people's lives.....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Nyaga Avatar
May 30, 2017 at 1:04 PM
Well delivered Teddy, with lots of insight
Kimathi Avatar
June 1, 2017 at 5:58 AM
Thank you Lewis, for your continuous readership and morale support!! :-)
Canerdy Avatar
May 30, 2017 at 8:24 AM
concise--and very thought-provoking! Janice
Kimathi Avatar
June 1, 2017 at 5:57 AM
Hehe. Sometimes we start living other people's lives, without knowing it. Thanks for your kind comment, Janice!! *^_^*
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