Perfection

We speak of God
as being Perfection

and yet we live lives
of imperfection

How is this possible?

Blaming it all on Freewill
is like blaming it all on the
Bosa Nova

A Perfect cannot create 
imperfection....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Empress Avatar
August 18, 2024 at 6:39 AM
Some blame everything on free speech and will and do as they want, but we as humanbeings we can’t be perfect i think? Im not sure how to respond to this deep and very meaningful poem. I know i am definitely imperfect, and flawed. In many ways. Pleasure reading your work dear joe, Sending you light.
DiMino Avatar
August 18, 2024 at 7:45 AM
Hi IE. I just ask the questions. Maybe we are not as imperfect or helpless as we think? Maybe God, history of wars, needs us to do more for ourselves. Love more maybe? I don't know. What do you think? Maybe what we think we are...we are. Blessings my friend.
Greenhough Avatar
August 17, 2024 at 9:18 PM
This is an intricate poem. I keep hearing the bossa nova in my mind. I don't even dance perfectly.
DiMino Avatar
August 18, 2024 at 7:47 AM
Yea, I know. Sometimes I get music in my head, and can't get it out. Blessings my friends,
Rodrigues Avatar
August 17, 2024 at 2:05 PM
Interesting!
DiMino Avatar
August 18, 2024 at 7:48 AM
Thank you for not condemning the messenger:) Blessings my friend. Have a great weekend.
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