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Perfect Universe

Perfect universe

I gave her 
  the moon,
 she handed me 
  the stars
     and together 
  our love
    created a 
      perfect universe



Ok, slanted Monoku :)

Copyright © Chris Green | Year Posted 2016

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Line Gauthier Date: 11/13/2019 9:57:00 PM Beautiful, Chris. Love should be so grand and so simple. Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 11/14/2019 7:08:00 AM It should but sadly it hardly ever is. Thank you so much for finding and reading some of my older pieces

Brenda Chiri Date: 10/29/2019 3:04:00 PM Perfect l!;) Login to Reply

Freddie Robinson Jr. Date: 1/3/2017 4:29:00 PM String those monoku pearls together, Chris. I didn't know what to expect when I was enticed by the title to come read this poem. You always deliver the goods though. Warm and thoughtful love poem. May love light your path always. Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 1/4/2017 8:09:00 AM Thanks again my friend for always leaving such kind thoughts for me.

Charmaine Chircop Date: 1/3/2017 11:25:00 AM The moon glows so beautifully amongst your stars...Lovely. Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 1/3/2017 11:39:00 AM Thank you sweet Charmaine. I always smile when you stop by.

Pashang Salehi Date: 12/30/2016 7:47:00 PM To me it is not complete, but it is perfect... very nice.. Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 12/30/2016 7:47:00 PM Thanks so very much my friend.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Date: 12/30/2016 7:30:00 PM And that, Chris, is definitely a perfect universe! Very nice. Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 12/30/2016 7:57:00 PM Thanks so very much Dane Ann.

Sunlite Wanter Date: 12/30/2016 6:54:00 PM It's me again, Chris, liking your work. Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 12/30/2016 6:55:00 PM You're always welcome on my page my friend. Thanks so much for your visit.

Winged Warrior Date: 12/30/2016 6:13:00 PM A star gazed love affair...a perfect slanted monoku Chris lol...^WW^ Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 12/30/2016 6:15:00 PM Thanks so much Winged Warrior. :)

Jan Allison Date: 12/30/2016 5:45:00 PM oh how beautiful and romantic Chris:-)So few words say so much:-) hugs Jan xx7 Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 12/30/2016 6:14:00 PM Thanks so very much Jan. I'm happy you liked his one.