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Perfect Universe

Perfect universe

I gave her 
  the moon,
 she handed me 
  the stars
     and together 
  our love
    created a 
      perfect universe



Ok, slanted Monoku :)

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Line Gauthier

November 13, 2019 at 9:57 PM

Beautiful, Chris. Love should be so grand and so simple.

Chris Green

November 14, 2019 at 7:08 AM

It should but sadly it hardly ever is. Thank you so much for finding and reading some of my older pieces

Brenda Chiri

October 29, 2019 at 3:04 PM

Perfect l!;)

Freddie Robinson Jr.

January 3, 2017 at 4:29 PM

String those monoku pearls together, Chris. I didn't know what to expect when I was enticed by the title to come read this poem. You always deliver the goods though. Warm and thoughtful love poem. May love light your path always.

Chris Green

January 4, 2017 at 8:09 AM

Thanks again my friend for always leaving such kind thoughts for me.