Perfect Sunbeams

I love you 
most precious jewel 
In the first kiss 
after absence is to be told

As long 
as the stars remain above you 
When love kisses 
eternity glows 
striking the very earth moving
 
Remains above you 
Crowning in your own world 
In one moment  
splitting hairs in time 

Pure is the legend of a vision 
promises to dance always 
In your shadow 
  
Co write Liam Mc Daid and David Bucknell
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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January 22, 2016 at 9:58 PM
stunning poem, Liam....................SKAT
Sage Avatar
January 22, 2016 at 10:46 AM
excellent write you two, fantastic
Trifiatis Avatar
January 22, 2016 at 7:50 AM
A beautiful collaboration with a wonderful result. A seven to each, dear Liam and David!
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January 22, 2016 at 6:47 AM
- A beautiful poem, dear Liam (and David) ! - I wishing you a blessed weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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January 22, 2016 at 5:11 AM
Hi Liam n' David!Wow!Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam,and this time in collaboration with your friend David.Just dazzling!So very beautifully written.Just awesome!A most beautiful,heartfelt,romantic,dreamy, enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!Just amazing!So wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Outstanding collaboration!Excellent imagery!Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + to each!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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