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Perfect Story Wrapped In Blue

(2011) Story of me and you A perfect story wrapped in blue We were tangled by coincidence I loved you for many reasons Lived life together in ours, called home Our perfect love was always a bloom Until storm attacked and dropped a gloom After a year of gratefulness, As a wife showered by kindness, You were taken away I was on life’s way of grey My life had spread me treason I recalled your presence with no reason Your reminiscence I couldn’t resist Of your fragrance mixed with sweat And your touch in tenderness? -prettiest threat And your sheer smile after a kiss? –a bliss Half of me had gone How would I move on? Beautiful dreams with you in it, After awakened, I cry with no tears in wilt Then more of me gone, I care no more Wound in my core? –more severe Every memory slits through my vein Push my blood do the bleeding My life’s breathing in vain ‘Till I meet you again, I’ll be mourning The agony as a witness I have no power to prevent Thousands of happiness Blackened by one accident Sits on 2nd place on BLUE contest by SKAT :)

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Date: 1/18/2014 6:33:00 PM
Dinda, you never answered me before about this poem. Anyway, I still love it. Congrats for your win.
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Dinda Minardi
Date: 1/18/2014 6:47:00 PM
Andre dear.. i thought i did, it must be not sent then. No, this is not a true storya Andrea.. im not married hehe. sorry i answered it now. thanks so much dear. hug!!
Date: 2/1/2012 7:37:00 PM
'A perfect story wrapped in blue We were tangled by coincidence' the focal point that make me comes back again and again as i read the piece through. powerful and passionate. ps. me too, i rarely write in indonesia which i found a hard predicament in myself (i can't even translate my english poem to indonesia!). sigh... thanks for stopping by hun and your kind comments
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Date: 2/1/2012 4:24:00 PM
Dinda. Is it YOUR Story? I hope not. But I think this must have really happened to you because it seems real. However, you may have made it up for the contest. Let me know. WAs it just fiction?
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Date: 8/17/2011 9:21:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your creative poetry with us Dinda. I enjoyed reading it this morning. I will be back another time to read more. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/16/2011 9:59:00 PM
Poignant and touchy tale, Dinda
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