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- Perfect Rhythm -


                                        The touch of spring

                                      A dream with no sleep

                                      Rewind back and forth

                                  Yellow light, I'm gonna smile



                                           Just for me to be

                                         With all of my heart

                                       Living those moments

                                      with joy and enthusiasm













02.05.2017
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Devnath  Avatar
May 29, 2017 at 9:37 PM
A divine rhythm indeed. Beautifully pictured my dear friend. Loved always, bl
Andresen Avatar
May 30, 2017 at 2:51 AM
- Bl thanks, your visit and support is greatly appreciated :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Marie Avatar
May 12, 2017 at 12:48 AM
You paint the beauty of spring through gorgeous words as if it is a part of you Anne-Lise:) Stunning, happy imagery, a joy to read. many blessings to you xxx
Andresen Avatar
May 12, 2017 at 3:13 AM
- Many thanks for your visit and lovely comments, my friend Lynn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Babcock Avatar
May 10, 2017 at 4:30 PM
Spring is in the air and love the picture that goes with this poem. Just had dental work done and now need to pull a tooth next month. I hope that after this next month all will be back to normal for me. love phyl
Andresen Avatar
May 11, 2017 at 2:10 AM
- Phyllis, many thanks for your visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Coreggia Avatar
May 7, 2017 at 2:55 PM
What a lovely musical piece Anne-Lise:) Amitiés
Andresen Avatar
May 8, 2017 at 12:37 PM
- Many thanks for friendly visits and comments, Anne-Marie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Williams Avatar
May 4, 2017 at 7:30 AM
I hope that means that spring is finally there Dear Anne-Lise? A lovely poem to welcome it, and such a cute picture to go with it. A7++
Andresen Avatar
May 4, 2017 at 11:25 AM
- Yes, hurray finally came the spring Maria :))) - Many thanks for your visit a 7 and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kannan Avatar
May 3, 2017 at 9:05 PM
So beautiful... A perfect title... I enjoyed it... A big 7...
Andresen Avatar
May 4, 2017 at 11:25 AM
- Many thanks for your visit a 7 and lovely comments, Supraja :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Haight Avatar
May 3, 2017 at 6:22 PM
So beautifully uplifting, Anne-Lise. I enjoyed reading your poem today! Hugs, Sandra
Andresen Avatar
May 4, 2017 at 11:28 AM
- Sandra, many thanks for your visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Smith Avatar
May 3, 2017 at 2:20 PM
Lovely, I hope that's a picture of someone you know...
Andresen Avatar
May 3, 2017 at 2:26 PM
- No, I do not know this girl ... but she's cute :) - Charlie, many thanks for your visit and great comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kinch  Avatar
May 3, 2017 at 11:48 AM
Beautiful Spring poem Anne-Lise.
Andresen Avatar
May 3, 2017 at 11:54 AM
- Many thanks for your visit and lovely comments, Elizabeth :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Smith Avatar
May 3, 2017 at 11:29 AM
Beautiful picture you paint of the awakening of spring
Andresen Avatar
May 3, 2017 at 11:32 AM
- Many thanks for your visit and lovely comments, Tim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
May Avatar
May 3, 2017 at 8:27 AM
Aah ..the sweet fragrance of spring..wonderful write Anne
Andresen Avatar
May 3, 2017 at 8:44 AM
- Joseph, many thanks for your visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Trifiatis Avatar
May 3, 2017 at 2:34 AM
Marvelous depiction of spring my friend, Anne-Lise! Finally spring has arrived over there! Rejoice! A beautiful 7! Hugs
Andresen Avatar
May 3, 2017 at 2:40 AM
- Yes, finally it's come ... the trees start to turn green and the birds sing :) - Many thanks for your visit a 7 and lovely comments, my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Wolf Avatar
May 2, 2017 at 7:25 PM
Just beautiful, Anne-Lise! Strikingly so!
Andresen Avatar
May 3, 2017 at 2:43 AM
- Many thanks for your visit and lovely comments, W.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Green Avatar
May 2, 2017 at 4:29 PM
A happy, fun, smile producing poem that brings spring right into my heart. Beautifully done my friend.
Andresen Avatar
May 3, 2017 at 2:41 AM
- Chris, many thanks for your visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
May 2, 2017 at 4:20 PM
Absolutely enchanting and so uplifting Anne Lise:-) hugs Jan xx
Andresen Avatar
May 3, 2017 at 2:44 AM
- Finally, spring has come !!! :))) - Many thanks for your visit and lovely comments, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Bateman Avatar
May 2, 2017 at 4:09 PM
Hello Dear Anne-Lise, All I can say here is that "A Perfect Rhythm" is wondrous, marvelous, and full of joyful enchantment. Very beautiful and quite meaningful. Superb!! TR/FAVE. Cheers and Best, Gary
Andresen Avatar
May 3, 2017 at 2:47 AM
- A great honor with a seven + fav. Gary - Many thanks for your visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Deo Avatar
May 2, 2017 at 3:21 PM
making sure: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7
Andresen Avatar
May 3, 2017 at 2:48 AM
:))) .... and finally " a fav." :)))
Deo Avatar
May 2, 2017 at 3:20 PM
Seven. For representing Heaven you know. Shalom
Andresen Avatar
May 3, 2017 at 2:50 AM
- Earth's heavenly nature ... I love spring :) - Many thanks for your visit and lovely comments, Anil :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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