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Perfect Rhythm

. What a beautiful inflorescence setting on our table gathering colorful chatter and the smiles were luminous His eyes were glowing his feet and little digits were in perfect rhythm with the beats of his ecstatic heart How much more could a father yearn for pray for have

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Brian Strand

Date: 6/16/2009 3:09:00 AM

Congrats on your succes in Debbie's contest James.Rgds Brian

Joyce Johnson

Date: 6/15/2009 10:35:00 PM

Congraltulations on your placement. Tenderly written. Love, joyce

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/15/2009 7:53:00 PM

Heart touching, wonderful poem. Congratulations on your placement in the contest!!! Love, Carrie

L'Nass Shango

Date: 5/20/2009 10:43:00 AM

This poem is a write par excellence ... magically good!

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 5/14/2009 6:36:00 PM

Hello James, this is excellent. I like the flow of the words and the message. The imagery of the table setting is awesome. If you would like to read some more of my haiku poems, check out my blog on my "2009 Best Christian Poetry Award." Great job! ~Joseph

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 5/14/2009 4:22:00 PM

Thank you I needed that after 30 days of wicked LOL check the contests..I believe this works for.....tatatadaaaaaaaa You Must Have Been a Beatiful baby.....Light & Love

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/14/2009 12:59:00 PM

now greater love than the love between a parent and a child-God bless your child---charma

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/14/2009 12:37:00 PM

Surely there is nothing more blessed than the love a father has for his son. This is beautiful, James! (There was a little boy from Africa singing last night on American Idol. His name was Noah and he was singing to raise money to eradicate AIDS in his homeland.) God bless you and little Noah! Love, Carolyn

Corinne Curcio

Date: 5/14/2009 10:05:00 AM

Very sweet and loving.

Ali Matheny

Date: 5/14/2009 9:11:00 AM

Excellent and sweet poem! I love it sweetie! Love You, Lexi! XOXOXOXO

Anthony Nutter

Date: 5/14/2009 8:50:00 AM

Excellent write (how much more could a father yearn for, pray for,… have) I agree.

Edward Orozco

Date: 5/14/2009 7:13:00 AM

Well-written! Good structure. - jeremiah