Perfect Muse

Warm breeze tumbling,
Lone oak in meadow swaying;
Natures peaceful trance.

Nathan Bane Leccese
© All Rights Reserved 06/30/09

*For Raul's Picture Contest.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Moreno Avatar
July 11, 2009 at 6:08 PM
Thanks for supporting my contest...Raul
Wilson Avatar
July 8, 2009 at 11:21 AM
Yes, I can feel how the rhythmic moving of the oak can induce a trance. Thanks for the restful moment.
King Avatar
July 7, 2009 at 3:14 PM
Oooohhh! I'm sooo jealous! may the best poet win ... ( lovely job, honestly!) Frances
Fraser Avatar
July 7, 2009 at 2:11 PM
Super Haiku, descriptive and delicate - all the best in Rauls contest>>James
Richards Avatar
July 7, 2009 at 1:36 PM
Nicely done....Raul will have quite a difficult job choosing there are so many lovely poems!!
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