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Perfect Muse

Warm breeze tumbling, Lone oak in meadow swaying; Natures peaceful trance. Nathan Bane Leccese © All Rights Reserved 06/30/09 *For Raul's Picture Contest.

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Date: 7/11/2009 6:08:00 PM
Thanks for supporting my contest...Raul
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Date: 7/8/2009 11:21:00 AM
Yes, I can feel how the rhythmic moving of the oak can induce a trance. Thanks for the restful moment.
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Date: 7/7/2009 3:14:00 PM
Oooohhh! I'm sooo jealous! may the best poet win ... ( lovely job, honestly!) Frances
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Date: 7/7/2009 2:11:00 PM
Super Haiku, descriptive and delicate - all the best in Rauls contest>>James
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Date: 7/7/2009 1:36:00 PM
Nicely done....Raul will have quite a difficult job choosing there are so many lovely poems!!
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