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Perfect Mess

In a perfect mess, That's where I relocate myself and find some rest. Humbly parallelized at nature's side, When all disappears our loss does qualify, With everlasting desire mocking the roots of the currupt, For healing epiphanies to interrupt. Although the lights we follow are blinding, Rejoice in the symmetry of finding, Your strength in every complex apprehension, To allow your fears their respective attention, And live with honest graceful graditude, While learning to accept our faults, So we can conclude, Enjoying a perfect mess in solitude.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/23/2009 10:04:00 AM
This Isn't a mess to me! LOL! I'm 11, just to let you know and i'm new here too! =) Keep it up! -Amber
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Date: 7/11/2009 10:33:00 AM
Lovely poem Heather, a warm welcome to the Soup to you>>James
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Date: 7/11/2009 4:39:00 AM
Hello Heather , welcome to PoetrySoup. Everyone has their little mess at one time or the other. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/10/2009 5:07:00 PM
Nice work. Sara
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Date: 7/10/2009 2:22:00 PM
Well, as long as it's an honest mess, Lol, Welcome to soup, Love Moses
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Date: 7/9/2009 8:41:00 PM
Welcome to the Soup, Heather, and thank you for your comments on my poem. I am looking forward to reading more of your poetry as well. Your ryhmes are very good but one suggestion, spell check. ::grin:: ~Trudy~
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Date: 7/9/2009 8:35:00 PM
Wow, very nice. Sounds a lot like my life right now... A perfect mess... Beautiful nice write I look forward to reading more by you! Welcome to poetrysoup!
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