Perfect Mess

In a perfect mess,
That's where I relocate myself and find some rest.

Humbly parallelized at nature's side,
When all disappears our loss does qualify,

With everlasting desire mocking the roots of the currupt,
For healing epiphanies to interrupt.

Although the lights we follow are blinding,
Rejoice in the symmetry of finding,

Your strength in every complex apprehension,
To allow your fears their respective attention,

And live with honest graceful graditude,
While learning to accept our faults, 

So we can conclude,
Enjoying a perfect mess in solitude.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Plocica Avatar
July 23, 2009 at 10:04 AM
This Isn't a mess to me! LOL! I'm 11, just to let you know and i'm new here too! =) Keep it up! -Amber
Fraser Avatar
July 11, 2009 at 10:33 AM
Lovely poem Heather, a warm welcome to the Soup to you>>James
Brown Avatar
July 11, 2009 at 4:39 AM
Hello Heather , welcome to PoetrySoup. Everyone has their little mess at one time or the other. Love, Carol
Kendrick Avatar
July 10, 2009 at 5:07 PM
Nice work. Sara
Freeman Avatar
July 10, 2009 at 2:22 PM
Well, as long as it's an honest mess, Lol, Welcome to soup, Love Moses
Rider Avatar
July 9, 2009 at 8:41 PM
Welcome to the Soup, Heather, and thank you for your comments on my poem. I am looking forward to reading more of your poetry as well. Your ryhmes are very good but one suggestion, spell check. ::grin:: ~Trudy~
Yates Avatar
July 9, 2009 at 8:35 PM
Wow, very nice. Sounds a lot like my life right now... A perfect mess... Beautiful nice write I look forward to reading more by you! Welcome to poetrysoup!
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