Perfect Memory

It's close to dawn and the moon's lit up
Clear of a night sky just you and I
Best of friends we are, having a lovely time
Speechless as can be, is this right?
You take my hand I pull away
You hold me tight through the night
The smiles of joy that came alive
Memories conbined I claim as mine
Hugs lasted here and there
Thought of kisses are what I fear
The night couldn't get better
If you haven't asked:
"one day we will be. One day just you and me
One day our hearts will sing. One day we will marry
One day our kids will have grown. One day we'll be gone..."

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 12/9/2012 10:47:00 AM
CONGRATS ON YOUR WIN FRIEND ANGELA. CHEERS!! :)
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Date: 12/8/2012 6:43:00 AM
congrats Angela on a superb write and win luv for fond memories ..
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Date: 12/8/2012 5:47:00 AM
Big Congratulations Angela love xx
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Date: 12/7/2012 10:45:00 PM
I enjoyed reading this one, Angela. Congrats on your win. The last line so sad!
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Angela Solis
Date: 12/8/2012 9:36:00 AM
Thanks for your kindness. Sadness is one of my invisible friends. All things I may write. Has some bit of sadness. I'm a teenager
Date: 12/7/2012 8:58:00 PM
Angela, , , CONGRATULATIONS :-) ON YOUR XOOL WINNING POEM~LINDA
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Angela Solis
Date: 12/7/2012 9:14:00 PM
I appreciate your kindness...
Date: 12/7/2012 6:30:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Angela Solis
Date: 12/7/2012 9:15:00 PM
I appreciate your kindness...
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