Perfect Melody

dancing in the rain patter sounds of the raindrops, perfect melody

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Matthew Anish

Date: 8/24/2010 5:59:00 PM

Fine 5-7- 5 poem here. The rainfall can be so romantic. Like the last line especially! Peace @ Blessings Matthew Anish

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/24/2010 7:07:00 AM

Quite an uplifting thought, Wilma, dancing to the melody of the rain. Let's dance! Love, Carolyn

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 8/24/2010 4:44:00 AM

You know I love the rain too.. very good Haiku, nice picture you bring the reader, glad you slept well luv Michael

Sharon Tideswell

Date: 8/24/2010 2:47:00 AM

Lovely imagery in your haiku Wilma. Sometimes being in the rain can be so nice, especially if you're with someone special. Thanks for stopping by my nutty blog ;) ~ Sharon :)